BIGFOOT 1

I agree with Berkazerka. My biggest thing is the lack of capitalization. Being dyslexic that can be a huge issue when reading pages with actual paragraphs(which I do wish you had). My suggestion is keep the idea(it's different and could be good), but try to have a whole paragraph per page and try building some character(s)and an actual story for the plot. I hope you continue to build and develop this story. Right now I'm rating it a 1/8, I hope I can come back when you have worked on it and rerate it higher.

Plotless!

Everything that BerkaZerka said is true. I would suggest reading some of the better games on this site, or just simply read a book, to help you improve in all areas.

I'm not going to give you a rating because I hope you will take this down and try it again.

Good (For a first that is).

Wow, it's like you just put this together just for the points. It could be improved in pretty much all areas (length, description, choices, plot, etc). If you ever decide to do more with it, I'll read it again and rerate it higher...