Big Time

Well, after many unsuccessful attempts I gained a happy ending for myself. Not exactly big time, but I'm happy with the ending that I did end up receiving regardless. I found myself choosing love at the end :)

Anyway the writing was good, correlating well with the pictures that was provided for the reader, and this story wasn't simple, I liked that. There was actually a bit of difficulty in this storygame, accompanied with the dread of trying to achieve a rather grand goal alone.

Although this isn't a very long game, it's a well-written one that's good to spend some with. This is a storygame that I would have no issue with recommending.

My only issues were with the loops, they weren't really fun to experience, but fortunately the good writing remedies that problem somewhat.

This was a good effort and enjoyable storygame, bravo.

The whole game had an air of hopelessness while still reminding you that there is always hope if you believe. Some of the combinations of events seem absurd if you play correctly, and I didn't care for the deja vu feel, but for a first story...well, I find it hard to believe that this is a first. Good-no, great-no, fantastic job! Yes, quite laudable.

Well written, although the font was a little too small for my taste. My only other complaint was that even though I drove Cindy Lou home, she was still in Springfield when I got back- so I drove her home again, and then she was at the restaurant where I worked. That girl gets around.

6/8. It could have been better, but its still good the way it is

I really liked this story, the messages hidden behind the choices, the endings... thanks. :)

toooo easy

This is a fun entertining story game, there are plenty of paths and its not a boring read. The only thing I would say is just make it a little more lively,and what I mean by this is make the characters do the things that a real person would choose.

5/8

I made it big.

my group of students enjoyed the weirdness

Great story, lovely descriptions and it does captivate a reader. I'll try and use this in one of my lessons, if I may!
Lovely stuff