Player Comments on Big Time

Well, after many unsuccessful attempts I gained a happy ending for myself. Not exactly big time, but I'm happy with the ending that I did end up receiving regardless. I found myself choosing love at the end :)

Anyway the writing was good, correlating well with the pictures that was provided for the reader, and this story wasn't simple, I liked that. There was actually a bit of difficulty in this storygame, accompanied with the dread of trying to achieve a rather grand goal alone.

Although this isn't a very long game, it's a well-written one that's good to spend some with. This is a storygame that I would have no issue with recommending.

My only issues were with the loops, they weren't really fun to experience, but fortunately the good writing remedies that problem somewhat.

This was a good effort and enjoyable storygame, bravo.

The whole game had an air of hopelessness while still reminding you that there is always hope if you believe. Some of the combinations of events seem absurd if you play correctly, and I didn't care for the deja vu feel, but for a first story...well, I find it hard to believe that this is a first. Good-no, great-no, fantastic job! Yes, quite laudable.

Well written, although the font was a little too small for my taste. My only other complaint was that even though I drove Cindy Lou home, she was still in Springfield when I got back- so I drove her home again, and then she was at the restaurant where I worked. That girl gets around.

I really liked this story, the messages hidden behind the choices, the endings... thanks. :)

toooo easy

This is a fun entertining story game, there are plenty of paths and its not a boring read. The only thing I would say is just make it a little more lively,and what I mean by this is make the characters do the things that a real person would choose.

5/8

I made it big.

my group of students enjoyed the weirdness

Great story, lovely descriptions and it does captivate a reader. I'll try and use this in one of my lessons, if I may!
Lovely stuff

"The movie is an unprecedented success! You are all the rage at film festivals throughout the world. Hollywood is abuzz with the news of a talented newcomer, that being you of course.
Like icing on the cake, you are presented with an Oscar for your role and become one of the most coveted stars in Tinseltown.
You look back to the day when you graduated from high school, and feel like it was part of another lifetime. You have overcome all hurdles and ended up making it, BIG TIME.
Congratulations!
*P.S. Making it Big Time is not the only way to lead a fulfilling a life, see if you can figure out how things could have been different ;)"

LOL! talk about a big dream!

very good story

If you want to learn a way to make it big time, read this comment.


1. Go to hollywood
2. Take the flight with the layover
3. Explore the city
4.Get a Job
5. Learn about roll 2
6. Do the Indie film

Easy but short storyline.

Yay I made big time.

I made it big time :D

The whole game was full of loops, and how much money do you have in your left sock? Not anuf to get a place to live but you can keep riding the bus out of hollywood and back and eating at the same over priced resterant indefintly, you would think you would learn your lession but no. Try adding a money varibal to the game, I feel that would help a lot with stopping the loops.

It's not bad. It's certainly well written, but here needs to be more options. For example it is impossible to get to New York. It could use a few more endings as well.

I made it Big Time!

Grammar and spelling was okay.
It seemed a bit short, but it was still very good and interesting. I managed to get the 'Big Time' ending.
This gets a 4/8.

kinda boring and short.

8/8... Mind boggling. Funny. Although I gave up marriage for my career...

That story really has a sense of achievement when you finally make it big time. The storyline was funny and simple. The links were a bit annoying (the repetition of them). Despite all that still an enjoyable adventure.

6/8

Good story, realistic plot, good choice of decisions. what more could I ask for a nice, well-written story?

I'd like there to be more endings and I couldn't find a way to go to New York no matter what I do...

This is a great story. There are some hard decisions, but believe me, it is very enjoyable.

This was a nice story! This was really thaught out and was a verry good story. Keep making stories like this! DBZFAN

Linear.

Being Naked is too overrated so I better be in indie film

Back when I was still a guest, I played this game several times. Wow, this game shows how hard life is in America, not as easy as you think. Making it Big Time is, in short, difficult, but if you have a good intention and strong will, you can do it.

I got the Get Married ending, it was so sweet! I played it again and got the Celebrity Yay Shtuff ending :3

I really enjoyed it :) Would have been perfect if there were more options and if it was longer but the story is still great

Good game and only one city was the correct choice to select.
There is no way to lose because you have infinite lives. A quick breezer for those bored!

I thought it was real sweet, and yes, that aura of an utterly hopeless tourist. It was written real well! I suppose you already know about the font, but I've got to say I'm real disappointed about the whole New York thang. I've got to say though, it was actually nice!

It was beautiful and very exciting . Although I would have considered a little more choices and a little longer story , it was perfect while it lasted . A must play ?

I really only sat through this so I could comment. It was terrible.... sorry. Don't play this

I had to drop from six to five because I kept winding up in the same location. How the hell do you get to New York? Aside from that, it's good.

Great story and game

This story was really broken by the extraordinary deja vu's. It wasn't badly written, but it was badly broken. I ran around in circles trying to figure out how to get out of the deja vu loop, and finally settled on marriage in Springfield (even though I didn't really want to) just for the sake of ending the game. I give this a 2/8.

In my opinion it is plotless.

amazinga little short though

I won

too many same option to choose from, and i even can't get to new york

I was worried for a second when I ended up in Alabama, but everything worked out in the end. This was fun and well-written. My only complaint is that it was too short!

I never actually bought anything, so why was money so important?

got 2 happy endings both times

Are there more than two endings? And is there any way to get to New York?

It felt like I was constantly starting over.

The only fault I could find was that the font was a little too small to comfortably read, and that's saying something. 7/8

Great.

I really enjoyed this story. I liked the idea- I know quite a few people who wanted to make it big out of high school and not many of them actually will.

To many flaws...

Pretty nice, truthfully I was expecting and you do drugs and drown in a toilet or a you're a star and *HAPPY* ending. Nice job Mina

Well written. I liked how you decreased the font size, looked good.

WOW! Great game!!!!!!!!!!

Well written and fun.

Wow! That was pretty fun...especially since I got to be a movie star! I really like your writing.

Vera good! I got the ending I think is best for me.

I liked it it was interestig

This was an awesome one

Not bad, could use some more paths and endings, preferbly some bad endings to.
but I can't knock, its well written and the choices made me think.
Keep up the good work

this game is great

cool.

That is a very great game. I got married at the end. Is the author still around?

Great Game! Make more make more!

Bravo! Bravo! It was hard, yet the final result was wonderful! I can tell that you spent a tremedous amount of time on this game and I'm sure that mine won't be nearly as good! I love it, but it would be even more awesome as an advanced game, where the money is the items, so that way, it could be even more elaborate. AWESOME GAME!!!!

Fantastic! I'm going to feature this game. Enthralling plot, many different choices, good pictures, great story. I'm very impressed. Please make more games!

Yay! I made it big time and won an Oscar! Make more games like this!

wow, what a piece of work. this is a great story. i could only find one ending though. is there more? i practically ran all over the US lol great work. March play and feature this game!

THIS GAME IS ONE OF THE BEST 'VE EVER PLAYED AND IT WAS FUN AS WELL. EVEN THEOUGH IT TOOK ME 20 TIMES TO WIN IT WAS STILL COOL.