Colosseum Crasher

no.

This is truly an unfortunate title. Very linear, no substance. If it's your first game, I understand. But if it is not, this is so crappy a storygame that I can't even begin to tell you what exactly is wrong. This could easily have been a conprehensive storygame, with shops, real-life events, different strategies for fighting the giant, and other opponents. Instead, it just turns out to be a linear piece of crap that does not deserve to be on this site.

Try to be more descriptive, aka not just saying you stab him he dies.

A good concept as far as it goes but a series of these fights bridged by some sort of plot in between (as in the film Gladiator) would make a longer and more entertaining read. Phrases like "you shoot him and he dies" can also be improved a great deal but I liked the overall fight.

This was far too short and lazy to be acceptable. You could of made this a lot better.

Needs more work, more variance, and more development. However, it's not a heinous concept.

better than some other stories I have read, but could be much longer and more entertaining, 3.5/8