Covered in Red

It's rather interesting.. The story takes a shocking turn and you don't expect what happens.. to happen!

You could possibly use a bit more detail on each page, and maybe you could make it harder to die?

It's okay, but pretty disorienting and doesn't make much sense. Moderately creepy and while I wouldn't say it was a waste of time, it certainly wasn't the best.

it's ok.

A little strange... doesn't make much sense. Creepy, though.

Not the best storygame I've played through.

First of all, the initial plot (escape from a strange room) is way to cliche. If you use keywords like "Room" or "Escape" you can easily find games like this, where you wake up in a strange room.

The writing was mediocre, but at best the grammar was superb. Caught no mistakes. The writing could have been more enriched, and take a small bound from "the thing drags you under the water, you are never seen again," to something a lot more well-written.

In my opinion, I think that some of the instances in this story weren't that logical, or at least, well-explained. For example, you wake up in the room, yes, but how do you set yourself free... just by punching it? At the end, we learn the girl is a deranged and murderous person, and is kept at an asylum. Therefore we can assume that the initial building (the room we wake up in) is an asylum, so... how does the protaganist escape by... punching it? Either the protaganist has a Falcon Punch ability, or the asylum has some very weak walls. Adding onto this, the protaganist would have to punch out an adequate enough space for her to wriggle out, which takes a lot more strength than punching a fist-sized shape out.

Another thing I didn't get was the woman. She is labeled to be an old woman, but then at the end we learn it was just the protaganist all along, so does that mean the protaganist is an old woman?

I liked the plot, and then the plot twist at the end, however. All in all it was a fun little story.

4/8. Good job.

This was an interesting storygame. Not really sure what to rate it, so I gave it 5/8.

lol i died at the end by hanging, this has nothing but bitter sweet endings.

wow this is what pshycopaths must see.
she thought there was a woman chasing her but it was her all along,she then kills her family and thinks they are sleeping.she dies of stroke years later

Wow... I understand why, but this game was amazing. I was always expecting a scary picture to pop up for some reason.

Great writing style by the way.

Wow, now that was fairly peculiar.