Dance With The Devil

"Well I am" is not works. I can't play it well bcuz of this
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I liked the story, it was fun to be a little nervous deciding how to approach the whole dance thing with. Plus I avoided dances like the plague when I was actually in school so better late than never?

I'd like to see an option to play as a girl (you could copy and paste the boy story line over and just switch the names.. like ask out "Brandon" instead of "Brandy")

Also would be fun to have options on how to get the date to say yes.

I like the story but the game was so short I barely got to enjoy it.

This story surprised me, in a good way. I'd love to see it fleshed out more, but the length is okay. On the page entitled, "Give Her A Chance" the link, "Well I am" doesn't go anywhere. If you unpublish this and put more work into it, let me know so I can reread it and give you a higher rating.

It was a little on the skimpy side, but other than that it was a pretty well rounded story. I'd like to read more as you get the hang of writing on here.

It was good. There was no way to actually die (the worst was losing popularity), unlike other school games, where you can die even though it is just school. However, there were a couple minor bugs and the length could have been longer.

Kinda synoptical...

It's more like a summary than a story.

Okay this is pretty good for a first game trust me mine was so horrible I erased from my memory. Some of the links don't go anywhere but overall a pretty good job not a ton of grammar errors and enough meat to be a short story. Pretty bang up job