Danny Phantom's Adventure

I'm sure the author had fun writing this, and the making the illustrations too. It is very short. This has a typical kid's show fanfic approach. We know the main character, we know what he or she can do, we know the setting. The main character does "the thing" in "the place," the end.

Other comments are praising this as "beautifully written" but I can't agree.

“Next to that one is a harder to see black door, but the light radiating off of the white one reveals the handle that was in the shape of a horse's head. You decide that the white door looks much safer so you slowly open it, feeling a warm breeze against your face as you did so.”

This is pretty representative. It's a little awkward and tense frequently changes midsentence. I'm not cherry-picking here, it happens several times per page. There are also a few places where the word choice is strange. Describing falling snowflakes as "Flowing" instead of floating or falling, a door "beckoning" to "be opened" not beckoning you to open it, which would be normal usage of the word. Despite how short the story is the author found many places to use words in almost the right way.

This was someone's first storygame here, and they probably weren't very old. Credit where credit is due. Nice job. This is a very shallow but fun dip into a good cartoon.

It has that classic CYOA feel to it, you know the children’s book series. It’s certainly a first try, and reminds me of my first tries from years ago when I wrote some stories on here under a different user name.

I love it so much! great game!

meh. I'm too far gone at this point to say anything useful.

Totally rad

Good has allot of potential. The one path I took was a tad bit short for my tastes but still it was beautifully written.

Bruh, this was fucking dark souls epic but like can I fuck Sam plz?

it was too lewd 10/10 i loved it

Nice game! I like to watch Danny phantom.

It wasn't very fun, but if it is one of your first stories, I think it is quite okay.