Dog Life

This story, well, it has a lot of options…that don’t really go anywhere. I can really appreciate the vast number of options. I really like that your first selection really sets the tone for the story and takes you down one of the three paths. However, beyond that, the story is so short that there’s not only not much of a story, but no real options beyond that.

There were still choices there, but often the choices simply led to one ending or another ending without any additional story in between. Indeed, because of the branching on the first page, each story ends up being shorter than a recipe. As others have pointed out, this is a neat idea. This is good concept for a story. The branching at the start is nice and takes the story in a good direction: but then suddenly there’s nothing. This could be a lot longer and more detailed and turned into quite an effective story if more time and care were taken with the story, I think.

i like the dogs

This game was about dogs as the author mentioned. Other than that there really isn’t much else here. The options seemed pretty obvious and I think this story would have benefitted from a perspective of one dog’s journey with branching paths.

The grammar and presentation was fine I supposed see the main reason this got a low rated is the lack effort put into it. All it needed was a fattened up word count that maintained the quality of the writing and a more detailed plot.

This story just felt kind of random and it didn’t feel like my choices mattered to the overall outcome which was disappointing but hey dogs cute so I guess.

Short and sweet. Loved it.

Cute, but not very detailed. My advice: try to make your characters MEAN something, rather than just being there. Also try to add more options per page.

Got bitten by ants. Not surprising.

7/19, story didn't really go anywhere.

wuish it was longer but pretty good

This was a fun story!

It was really good, but too short.

It's a nice thought, but very short.

3/8