Doors I

I think you are a very good writer, but there seems to be little effort put into this story. There are very little hints as to what will happen when you make a choice, and I went through every path to see if there was more than one "good ending". Unsurprisingly there was not. Also the cliffhanger at the end. If you want to write a story ending in a cliffhanger, just write a book series! Storygames should have a proper ending, not a cliffhanger! You have potential to make great games, but this is not the way to do it.

This was a shame. Most of the short story games seem to be from people who tried hard, but were just not very good writers. This game had the opposite problem. You're a really good writer, I just don't think you tried very hard. Instead of making a series of games where you open three or four doors and nothing really happens, why don't you write one long game with lots of doors, where the player actually feels a sense of achievement when they win?

MY PANTS GOT A LITTLE TO WET PLAYING THIS GAME TODAY I WOULD NOT RECOMNED PLAYING =) WITH THE LITTLE SALLY DOLLS THEY DO NOT TRY TO SOOTH YOU EEVN THO IM SOPOSED TO BE THE MIAN MAN

IM SCARED THIS MADE ME VERY SCARED DONT READ UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE SCARED FOR LIFE.

i was scared the whole time i might have mental disorder now because my dick got 2 inches smaller and now its 1/2 a inch (and im 37)

My stinky got scared when it siad MONSTER MONETSER WHOOOOO BOOOPOPOOOOOOOO POOOOOOP LALALALALALALA;A; AHHHHHHH i almost shit me myself for the third time today playing this game i woulnd not recamamend becwuase thiw game is reallly scqrey in it i mak4 es nyou do some thingfs nyoi u8 might not wannna do

I really liked the story.

That was... That wasn't a puzzle game! You just opened random doors and hope you don't die. That's not how puzzle games work! I really don't feel that I should have to explain this, but puzzle games actually require puzzles.
>.<

Not too shabby for a first Story game.

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