Hot dog

A sci-fi storygame by jollecal

Player Rating1.50/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 13 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty6/8

"Wandering through the desert"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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there was at least some effort put in to the story, but, no where near what it it should be like.

— Shinobi on 9/21/2016 11:44:06 AM with a score of 0

There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. The formatting is also off. If you want people to enjoy your writing, you should proofread it before publishing it, use proper sentence and paragraph structure, and ensure there is a plot. On a website like CYA, you should also work to make paths and options that allow the reader to feel more control in the outcome.

— kitkatkaity on 9/19/2016 10:40:59 AM with a score of 0

Tell your teacher she made a dire mistake.

— Malkalack on 9/16/2016 4:25:11 PM with a score of 0

VERY promising start and for that I COMMEND YOU for making a decent game, but...

Then you pulled out the random humor, and everything went down hill. I should've guessed from the title that this would be an 'omg so random' game, but I honestly had hopes based on the intro that it would be a good game with a completely unfitting title.

Good luck with improving. :(

-Charaxes

— Charaxes on 9/16/2016 4:04:09 PM with a score of 0

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Hot dog

Player Rating1.50/8

Story Difficulty6/8

Play Length3/8

Maturity Level4/8

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