Is Dave Chappelle crazy?

This was a strange one. The story was also kind of boring. I was not captured by either the hopeful or appalled feeling that I have been recently by reading the fan fiction section. This was just a meh read. I hope you know that OJ Simpson the football player and OJ Simpson the murderer ae the same person.

5/10 won't read again

This was alright. I didn't hate it, but I didn't really like it either. It was overall just boring and there wasn't really any substance to it.

The very first thing that I noticed was the text. You constantly changed text color which is distracting and sometimes takes away readability. I don't care enough to see if there's a meaning behind it, but just so you know, people don't usually like that.

I think you were trying to capture Chappelle's style in this, and if you were, you did an ok job. It does ok at humor, though I personally don't like much of Chappelle's stand-up, so that might be why I didn't really enjoy the humor.

This is much less of a story and much more of a game, which is something that I don't really like. This is chooseyourSTORY after all, and there's really no story to this. The writing is meh and has several errors throughout. It just feels like it was thrown together in a day and doesn't seem to have much effort.

One last thing I'll note is that stories in this format typically work better in second person. The third person you used is ok, but usually the goal of CYS stories is to put the reader in the mind of the protagonist, not just outside.

So check bad?

A funny short CYOA without neglecting work, chores, or children.

Funny story. I wish it was longer though and some of the text was hard to read.

That was funny, though too short :)

Hey, I managed to make Dave insane. Hurray

Yeah... Like Kiel, I tried to lose but still ended up winning. 2/8

I won!

Great game. Funny at some parts. I think the length could be longer, but it's decent nonetheless. Very creative and thought out. I like it.