Little Fighter 2: Julian

Meh. There weren’t a lot of actual choices for this story, but overallbit was foot. Some grammar mistakes though.

Srsly only 1 choice lame

I wish I could have rated this higher! Your style's pretty good and your grammar has half the website beat. Next time integrate some more paths and you should be good!

Could there actually have been some choices?

If you want to write fan fiction with no choices, don't do it on a choose-your-own-adventure site. FanFiction.net is a good place for this, not CYS.com.

Too few choices. (Sorry, I'm just checking out your games) XD

How come there is only like three choices IN THE WHOLE GAME!?!?!?

Are you kidding me...? You gave us a storygame and you actually say in the description "No game play involved" and "you can't lose" yet you really expect us to find this an "enjoyable read"?

Have you -played- a good game or read even a mediocre an interactive fiction lately? I know I've said before that gamers today want to be babied, but this is just ridiculous. I play games for a CHALLENGE. "Make one choice and you win" is honestly the most boring concept for any game I could possibly imagine.

I was suprised that I won the game by clicking one choice.

5/8