You are offered a scholarship to a prestigious boarding school situated on a isolated island called Abditus. It's a very mysterious place, the only things of note being the small village of Sanctum and the Campus. Mysteries abound in the shadowy Maximus Academy, and no student escapes unscathed at the end. Dangers have no bounds on Abditus, but it offers the opportunity to unveil your true potential; possibly becoming the most powerful Mage in the world. Seems like a great opportunity, doesn't it? Behind it's peaceful demeanor, Maximus Academy possesses things better left hidden and secrets better left unsaid, slowly poisoning the waters around it.
In Maximus Academy, pursue your ultimate dreams, discover your true worth, battle your way to the top and defeat all who stand in your path. Become the ultimate Triae, bobble along as an Armige or serve humbly as a Famulu. Rise to glory, carve your path, and walk the earth with all existence as your servant.
Or decline the scholarship and face the consequences...
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Hi! This is my first storygame, and I'd appreciate any feedback. I can take criticism, and would like you to be as honest as possible with me. I'd like to improve as much as possible and be the best I can be, but I need the help of you talented people on this site. One thing about the criticism is that I ask you not to swear at me or my work. I am a young person (who prefers not to share her age), and I'm not entirely comfortable with people cussing at me. If you do, I'm totally cool with that, I'm just wondering if you could consider either cutting down on the cursing or just trying to avoid it.
Soo... yeah. You don't have the option of being a boy or girl, but I'm thinking that if I get positive reviews I might try another storygame set in the same world.
Hope you enjoy it! :)
