My Sweet Anna

At first I was really kinda liking it. Yes, the memories were all very trite, stereotypical "romance" moments, but It felt like you tried to give it some decent description, your spelling and grammar were good, too. Then, what happened? The end feels like you just got tired of writing. You gave me a couple of memories, then out of nowhere "you were married for x number of years and had x kids the end."

I think I appreciate the game more for what you were trying to do than what you actually achieved. It felt very rushed, going straight from meeting her to marrying her and then to some other memory and then the end. I didn't really see anything meaningful in there that made me care about the characters or feel like they were really in love. I think if you want people to feel a connection with the characters in a short space of time, you have to focus more on little scenes that seem unimportant but demonstrate the kind of relationship the characters have instead of big things like meeting, wedding, pregnant, death.

ok game.

I'm crying this is truly a sad story and I have nothing better to do but wish that you make another hopefully you do :)

Sadly Sweet. I like it.

Well this felt a bit awkward.
I met Anna and the next thing I know we're married with a daughter. What on earth happened during all that time? Need more details. It was over too quickly as well.

I dont really like it. Overall 4/8

A very disjointed story. Doesn't mesh.

Soooo, he met anna, he married anna, anna died, anna was their daughter.

had this not been so rushed and actually had a little more story into anna it would have gotten a bigger emotional response then it barely achieved.

Ouch! I was so close to crying like a baby! lol