Rings of Stone

Decent prologue to the true story. Can't really call it much more than that, as it stops literally as soon as you would have started the school aspect.

Characters have potential, but we didn't really have enough time to explore any of them.

It held my attention, although I hated that you used single quotes instead of double for dialogue. Some parts also seems cluttered, along with some spelling and grammar errors.

Man. It ended just when it was starting to get good.

I felt early vibes of Harry Potter and later vibes of Percy Jackson; and while that's not altogether original I think you pulled it off. For me this is a case where the writing was far superior to the plot.

That being said, since the story hadn't quite started yet it was still well written and enjoyable; though I am left wanting more.

Ok

make more

I look forward to the rest of the story

I enjoyed this. Please make something similiar

Ah, it's simply too short. So I pick a stream and then the game just ends? Boring!

I would love to have a next chapter

I must say after playing this again I truly do enjoy it and hoping for a part 2!

9.9/10