School Problems

... Depending on what path you take, this story is either mediocre or ... just unfortunate. If you're going to make a story that involves repeated child rape and poop jokes, you should at least have the talent to make it funny.

On the other hand, it's not warrior cats, so I'm sure a lot of people are willing to give it a pass regardless.

Haha. I found this amusing. I mean, you write well, but there just isn't a plot. I don't see the point in the story other than to entertain with... disgusting things.

You certainly could've given a reason why everyone was fat? HOW certain things happened. That could've enhanced the humor of the whole thing. I'd like to know the WHY and not just the "Everyone is fat, so laugh with me."

Still, you're writing is good, and I think if you wrote something with an actual plot, you'd do well. :D

Horrifyingly bad. I can't believe I just sat through this filth with my mind still intact. From the instant you click on the fateful word "Toilet", you know what you're in for.

This is not worth reading in any way...

Why hasn't this been deleted yet?

muahaha i got the good ending and became a billionare

Awful.

Good ending yay! But... Why were those "teachers" even allowed to be teachers?! Oh well. At least I became rich and now have a lifetime supply of money.

What the hell did I just read? This is... wonderful. Okay, it's not that good, but it is twisted, and I like that. :P

this story was like an accident, i didn't want to stare but just... could... not... look... away!
As weird and disgusting as it was, it was actually entertaining.