Terra Proxima: First Strike

Very impressive :)

This was a storygame that I found myself immensely enjoying as I read. I liked that it never felt like there was a sense of urgency in the narrative, everything for the most part was both cohesive and written well, giving this story a rather nice flow to things.

The action was superb, being innovative and a bit refreshing with the system that was in place. At least in my opinion because I genuinely find things with sci-fi elements to be cool when done well, and this story does pull off many things well. The universe feels original and it's obvious that plenty of thought was put into making it so.

A good use of pictures, strategy, and writing certainly made this a rather immersive and fun experience.

My only gripe with this is that it ended when things really were picking it up :( But that fact certainly makes me excited to play a continuation of this storygame, as this was definitely enjoyable to read.

Overall, I think that this was a solid piece of writing.

This game requires a lot of honesty.

I am not an honest person, after the first time I cheated my way through.

Still very fun in concept and a throwback to the old gamebooks, but I'm not sure it works as more than a brief curiosity. What I mean is that picking numbers off the random number table and recording ammo and HP by hand might be interesting in theory, but realistically most people are going to cheat. And if the author wanted to prevent cheating, the editor has built in ways to track all these things without leaving it up to the player's honesty.

The writing isn't hugely exciting but it's serviceable given that this is more of a mechanics focused game anyway. And it has been around the site for an impressively long time.

cool

Very nice! Although some spelling mistakes but that doesn't really matter

Cool concept. Don't like having to keep track of things myself. Writing isn't great either.

Amazing game story??

great

I'd like to play more story games like this. Well thought out, well written, and it has a realistic feel. Plus the science fiction aspect is interesting.

MAN ARMY LIFE IS BRUTAL

Fun, innovative, and always an interesting read! You have a lot of writing skill and practice. Enough to make me want to play this game (and its sequel) a second time through just to see what else I can do.
8/8