The Fields of War

A family friendly storygame by MysteriousPresence

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 5 ratings so far

Story Difficulty8/8

"Mosie through a minefield"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level7/8

"Anything goes"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

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A story set during the Napoleonic era in an alternate world. Me and my friends started this project some months ago but we never really got around to finishing it. We are publishing it now just to see what you guys think of the parts of the story that are finished. This was our first experience at writing for the website. Perhaps we will complete it in the future if we feel inspired. If we are breaking any rules of any kind by publishing an unfinished game, please let us know. Thanks.

Player Comments

Dead pages....*finger wags*, that is a no-no on this site.

— Jimmysutton on 5/18/2017 5:26:43 PM with a score of 0

I would advise at least putting in.placeholder endings. I didn't run into any straight up dead end links (at least so far) so this may not be technically breaking any rules, but 'This is a new page' followed by an.End game link isn't must better as far as the reading experience goes.

Otherwise, the writing here and the amount of work put in so far is impressive, and it's a shame this is unlikely to be finished.

(If you do ever complete it, please make a parlor room thread; unfortunately by putting the unfinished version up now you've marked it with today's publish date, so if taken down and added to some time from now it won't show up on the new storygame page when you republish.)

— Mizal on 5/17/2017 7:54:25 AM with a score of 0

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