The K.I.L.L?

A horror storygame by andrew123

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 7 ratings so far

Story Difficulty5/8

"Run through the jungle"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level2/8

"Choking hazard for children under 4"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

Player Comments

I don't always agree with Alien Alpha, but when I do, it's usually a bad thing. I hope English isn't your first language. You need to edit your stories. If you want to write a good story game answer the questions Who? What? When? Where? and Why? Give us an idea of what is going on, why it is going on, where it is happening, when some key events happened, who we are and who the other important characters are. We really don't have any of that.

— ugilick on 5/31/2013 11:57:13 PM with a score of 0

Randomness is good in short supply, but you just drowned your story with it. I found it wet and sloppy from the submersion of the random events thrown in.

— alienalpha on 5/31/2013 11:35:20 PM with a score of 0

I gave it a 2, because the game was too linear and the writing was not too good. Grammatical errors everywhere. Also, it was way too short. Good try though.

— Xt1000305 on 5/31/2013 10:31:51 PM with a score of 0

Rate 4/8 or higher and i will make more

— andrew123 on 5/31/2013 10:01:02 PM with a score of 0

It is pretty good but you got to be the one that try.

— andrew123 on 5/31/2013 9:57:28 PM with a score of 0

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The K.I.L.L?

Player Rating?/8

Story Difficulty5/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level2/8

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