The Midnight Monster

Quite a few spelling mistakes. It's spelled 'through' not 'threw,' because 'through' is for 'going through' something and 'threw' is the past tense of 'throw' as in 'I threw it away.' >_> Which is what you should've done with the script for this story. It's... poorly written and not remotely creative in my opinion.

It's bad, but not to the degree where it's actually funny to me. It's sick, but not in a way that's amusing. It's short and has a small word count, which may be the only saving grace for most bad writing, but that also reassure me that, yes, you really didn't put any actual effort into this. Knowing that decreases my respect considerably. I do agree with you, though, there is nothing special about it and it makes no sense.

"Sadly you had aids and gave them to 36 people when your blood splattered everywhere ... Dick." Wtf? Is that suppose to be funny? I'm not a prude and gore's fine, but that was just sort of tasteless. The "you're raped 'til you die because you bought porn" or "you're raped stupid and die retarded" endings aren't much better.

Um, what?

More to the story, please. :)

I want a better choose your own adventure author and a damn cookie.

I went to the porn shop LOL best day o' my life

Lol that was really random. Those spelling mistakes though... :/

Really. I kill someone and then die because I drown on their blood. >:( This game also has some spelling mistakes like "wate" instead of "wait". But the game needs work. It might be random but seriously? A rapist clown appearing behind you because you lock a door, instead of letting someone in, when the person has no relation to a rapist clown!
/endshortrant

I tried again and lost because the only thing I could do was pee my pants. Which made me lose. ?

Um...Not PG, there aren't Nazis in London, but I want to try again.

3/8
Just because at least there were a lot of choices.

Well that was, eventful. At least.