The Run Away

This story was quite odd, and that is meant as a compliment, believe it or not. It was random, but the main character's sudden misfortune in some of this game's "dead-ends" were what surprised me the most.

This was quite fun to read :)

Like madglee said, exploring the house was fun but maybe add more about being on your own. Jason certainly has an interesting family doesn't he? Also, too many of the deaths were random and unpredictable. (I can maybe understand the cult) Doesn't this kid know his own house? It would be nice if before you made decisions you were given some background information on what you know about that (I think the kid should remember the rotweiler before leaving) then let the player decide which risk to take. Also, does Jason's family have a GIGANTIC toilet or something? 'Cause that's the only half-plausible way to die from being flushed.

Pretty nice writing and a lot of choices early on. After thoroughly exploring the house, I was thinking, "this story is pretty good," then went to step outside for my adventure. Instead, every link ended the story. Hrmph. This should be called, "Prelude to actually running away." Expand the story to include what happens when you do run away and it could be pretty good.

it's ok next time whoever wrote this should make it longer

So ridiculous i could not stop laughing at the endings.

Swearing. Ugh. Change rating maybe?

I don't understand the story

i went back and trid multiple things and some are really funny

This was... unusual. It was still fun.

Uh, random... WHAT IS THIS?