The Title Has Been Abducted by Aliens

good...for you to poop on

It was really good. But don’t send anything to that email because it is a random email.

I have no idea how this has almost a four. A three would be reasonable, but I guess some people just really like this. I do not sympathize with them.

First, the writing is not great. The punctuation is terrible, the grammar is often off, and there are several spelling errors.

The actual plot of it is somewhat unique, but not well developed. I'll give you credit for actually having a story with build and a resolution, so that's something at least. There's hardly any atmosphere building, so it's difficult for the reader to put themselves in the eyes of the protagonist. I think that with more atmosphere, this could be a decent story even with its shortness.

Finally, there's really no meaningful interaction with other characters. This makes it so that the only way for the protagonist to develop (which they hardly do) is through their own actions and situations. I wasn't able to find any meaningful dialogue, though I didn't look very hard because I have no desire to read this.

Sure, it may be immature and sure, it may be unoriginal, but I rather enjoyed my time with this action game of action.
Actually kind of reminds me of myself when I was but a lad and was new to story Games.
Excellent for sitting in the waiting room

Pretty funny. Clearly made by a kid, probably a middle schooler so it's obviously no Citizen Kane, however, if good dumb fun is what you desire then The Title Has Been Abducted by Aliens delivers.

pretty fun. could have been longer. the only thing is maybe you could have an option to not die of insanity at the end? :D

The title is rather amusing, but it's boring and cliche. So very cliche!

Your title is certainly rather amusing, so points for that.

There's quite a few grammatical errors. While this isn't a huge deal, it does make the story seem rather amateurish. The story is good, but very unpolished. There's nothing really special. There aren't any unique characters, the setting gets only bland description, and the action scenes are simply there.

i won't complain because its hard to make a story... grammar is ok... story was funny(also were the endings especially the ending after killing the alien. ha ha)and the story was perfectly short. did i mention it was sooo funny.

i had the chance to kill or spare an alien, i spared it and SOMEHOW won...? shouldn't the alien have grabbed the gun and shot me?