The Watch of Time

My answer to everything was bagel 🥯

I think I found all the ends. The Bad End, The Neutral End, The Good End, and The Other Good End. Is that all of them?

I like the idea behind the story, but I barely got into it before it ended. I think you could have gone a lot further and expanded on this story much more. You certainly could have told good stories about working for the elite sect, or living in the year 827, or even an incident of time travel.
So far the amount of branching isn't too bad but can always be improved. You could have also done something with the items---I don't think I found a use for the phone or the bagel.
There's potential for this, so 4/8.

I thought this game would be a lot more different. I tried a couple of times to get a few different endings yet they all ended abruptly. I think , to improve , you could of given more side-stories to go on , and when you work with the Government you should expand that into another side story.
I hoped for better

vury god

An interesting story about time travelling. Somehow the failed experiment where the scientists turn into skeletons is slightly disturbing. :)

Interesting concept. Would have liked to dig into the whole shadow government organization thing more. But still, not bad. Not bad at all.

The story managed to capture my interest and the lack of information in the beginning kept me going. However, the ending was a little abrupt. Where the story ended felt more like where it was starting to begin.

Just like gummy bears...

Small and sweet. However, like some others, I would like bigger gummy bears. Same sweet, more amount.

Basically what I'm tryna' metaphorically convey to you is that it could've been longer, though seeing as this is your debut story it's forgiveable.

And that's just it. Everything else was good. Plot was okay, grammar and choices were okay, the endings felt a bit lacking, but at least you had the good sense to end them nicely, with a summarized entry of what is to come.

Good job on creating a not too good but absolutely NOT too bad story! 5/8.

Short, but not bad.