What Do You Want To Do Tonight?

I really liked this :D It reminded me of a relationship I was in when I was about 16-18 when I just wanted to have fun with my girlfriend Amy by doing stuff like you described about in these stories: biking together, going to movies, dinners, playing X Box etc :D It's a nice kind of innocence before adult life intervenes :P

I thought your story was very well-written and fun, like Kiel said you kept the shole sexual element out of it and it sounded like activities two very best friends would do together in a romantic way rather than two lovers, the pictures definitely helped make the story more fun and entertaining. You have a nice sense of humour in your writing style which also helps make the story more readable as well :D

Overall good work, this is a nice little story and quite fun to read through for five or ten minutes so good work :D

Huh... okay, this wasn't as bad as I expect "personal" projects to be and you intentionally skipped out on making this some excuse to write about you boning your boyfriend/crush/significant other like most folks (which, goddamn it, always makes for a terrible story, always) so thanks for that.

On the other hand, this wasn't very polished and... honestly kind of bored me. It's still not a high quality or exciting story, and a reader knowing this wasn't for them is not going to feel invested. I hope your SO liked it, and if he did, great... but eh. This is still below what I consider average.l standards.

Hi Mandiee! Upon reading your story, I must say that you did a great job on making it long and has a couple of choices especially when I was able to experience the extreme adventures and got the happy ending. Well, I chose the movie first but the ending is not that satisfying so I played it all over again. Moreover, yes it's long but I think it needs more emotions for the readers to get hooked up and not be bored. :) Kudos!

it was fine

I think the game is very boring and misleading...

Ahhh needs to be longer

The grammar was very awkward and made the story difficult to get through. The story itself also felt rushed.

It was so nice keep up the good work

I think this was smart. And censored, which is good. I liked it. Mountain biking Is my thing so I'm glad that choice was there.

Wow this game is the sweetest! Loved it!