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Do you need to fix the Endgame Links at the end? They are showing, but not clickable for some reason - You may want to check any Scripting in use...

The writing style is very reminiscent of Alter Ego. Overall though, it's a gimmick game. Once you figure out the trick, there's no real reason to play again.

I see that you have a deep concept that you wish to share with the readers, but it's just not executed well. Rather, the whole theme of your story isn't emphasized enough; I was rather perplexed by the lack of Endgame links and having to repeat a story that wasn't exciting enough over and over again. The theme really needs to be strongly hinted at and emphasized as to keep readers with a feeling of knowing that there's something else to be discovered. For me, I quit playing this game several times before I completed it because I could not figure out what I was supposed to be doing.

That being said, it is a theme that should, by all means, be emphasized because people just do not understand this concept enough. This game is deep and thought-provoking, and should be written as such. It has a clever usage of the editor in a way that is totally unexpected. All in all, it's a refreshing change from the status quo of regular stories.