Player Comments on A.M.I.E. (1.1)

This really wasn't what I had expected. I thought there were going to be a lot of decisions. I didn't even get to raise AMIE like you said we'd be able to. I thought there'd be a multitude of decisions to make in regards to raising her and it would affect the outcome. Instead all that happened was that she became a killer machine anyways and tore my arm off when I tried to Falcon Punch her. This story had a lot of potential but it looks like you got lazy and abruptly finished it. You should go back to this and make it longer and with a lot more decisions that actually affect the outcome of the story.

The idea behind this story was intriguing, but the story itself was not really what I expected from the description.

Much of this story is mundane. There is a lot of get up, get dressed, get to work in extensive detail before encountering AMIE. While at times this can be amusing, this part of the story did not have any choices attached, and did not seem to affect the way the narrative would play out. Actually, branching overall was pretty weak, and there were only a couple of places in the entire story where a meaningful choice was able to be made.

The author tries hard to produce a fleshed out character and uses lots of detail to build his world. However, for me, most of this fell flat as it did not add to the narrative at all. The many tiny details seemed to bog down the story, rather than contribute to it. However, I liked that the author put forth effort here rather than just doing a data dump on the main character.

The actual encounter with AMIE is very disappointing. It would seem like this would be the meat of the story. However, it was just too short, to limited, and I never really got a chance to to teach her. I would have enjoyed the author exploring this much more.

Overall, not the best game or story out there. However, with some effort it has potential to be a solid story.

it's great

This was not a good game. The intro was too long, and you make 0 descisions about how amy behaves. How can the entire ending about amie be based on what you do shile she is asleep!? Stay away, far far away......

It's very good, i'd like more but it's good none the less

MEH! could be better

Well, not many choices and it's very linear. I would've loved to see more you can do with Amie, and why in the world is the ending called "Heavenly saint"? There was nothing about that in there.

That was fun. I was a simple vassal used to take over the world. Now I can knock that off my bucket list.

It's is a good story but it is too short

It says that I have to leave a comment to be able to rate the game.

The character had a horrible private life, attempted to find solace in AMIE, and she assimilates him, then they conquer the world. Good concept, but it was executed as if the writer was under the influence of narcotics. Lol.

Description is very misleading to say the least, borderline a straight out lie. Maybe it's cause i chose the protocol option, but i can't be bothered to replay. Sad to see so much potential wasted.

Wait, so if I pull up a chair and keep her company while she sleeps she goes batshit, but if I keep her company and pull up the covers, great? What?

I took over the world, and still have my car keys, now only if I could do that in real life.

Boring, and not what it leads you to expect.

Great story but it could have been longer and more stuff in it. I also like the inventory function as well.

Got the very bad ending but a good game.

Its just too linear.

It was pretty good I love stories like this

Fantastique! It's quite inspirational.
With a few more expansions, this can become a beginning for a whole new franchise. I truly think so. Indeed, I believe this, as well as your other work has great potential to become a catalyst for intellective revolution.
Actually I have a few ideas on progressing the story ahead if anyone's interested. As well as generally being up for any intellective debate.

this story really is amazing. the concept is interesting and engaging, and not entirely predictable. some minor grammar errors, but otherwise, this is a brilliant story worth of the 7/8 i gave it.

holy thats an evil thing

That was short. Not saying anything else.

interesting but needs more.

Could use more choices

Pretty cool story, but not enough story branches.

Good.

There are no choices, and then suddenly it ends.

love this one. great story and some very good pun.

This is the best game in the world!

Sweetness got what I think is the best ending.

This is a really interesting idea. Structurally, there needs to be some more proofing. I'd also like more choices. I feel like I'm not really involved at all. I only made a few decisions and most of those had nothing to do with the central concept of the story (like where to park?). If you did more with this, I would definitely come back for it.

Awesome! May I suggest a sequel?

AMIE--ROBOT APOCALYPSE!

coolio

i like this story...please make more XD

lame

It's an okay story, but I just can't help that you didn't indent. It get's hard to read.

Got the bad ending this time. Its good good good, keep them coming!

I personally like stories which have robots in. Enough said!

You had some spelling errors and needed a few more commas. Also, try using the italicize function rather than the bold function for your thoughts, it's less obnoxious to the reader's eye. Other than that, I liked the story even though I don't think I had as much choice as I would have liked 5/8.

very simple and positive

I got the good ending link fixed. For some reason it was linked to nothing :/. Thanks for the feedback :). Although this was technically a "test" I wanted to made it a good read as well. Maybe I will make a dating story :P. Sorry for the bad link all. I hope you will read my next stories :).

i finished and explored every path, but got sad that the best ending wouldn't work :( Nice game though, kept me entertained.^_^

It could be slightly longer and try to expand on the normal life of Raymond. I was hoping for a date with
my co-worker. :P

i got the heavenly saint ending, and when I clicked it I scrolled up to the top and did it again. I replayed it and it happened again. It was a good storyline, but it wouldn't work correctly. 2/8