Battlefield Commander: The Trojan War

Well, unlike many of your works, this was a bit bland, there were a few grammar errors and while I know that info about the Trojan War is easily found with just a click, many of the actions and sceneries lacked significant description

That said, however, this was a very good example of a Battlefield Commander, I rate it with a 5/8

Wow, this was a really, really cool re-telling of the Trojan Horse, and definently one of my more favorite stories from you, Will. The way the writing immersed the reader was amazing, made me feel like I was actually there and participating in the war. With this immersion brings a new perspective on the classic Trojan Horse story, one that I really enjoyed.

I didn't like how it was a little linear, but I suppose the rank mechanic and the way you could side with different leaders in different situations makes up for it.

Good work Will!

6/8.

Really cool! Love the famous Greek myth underlay and inspo. Uh, I got caught in a loop...I'm not sure if that was suppose to happen. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Very fun and descriptive! Needs a part II...perhaps The Odyssey?

Good:

1. I liked seeing different facets of the war and what happens to different characters depending on which fighting force I join

2. The level of detail throughout was enjoyable


Bad:

1. After a small group that I was a part of discovered an enemy spy and extracted intel about enemy reinforcements from him, the story said that scouts found the reinforcements, as if I wasn't involved in it

2. Typos; proofreading is needed

I especially enjoyed reading about the ruthless cunning of Odysseus. I don't know how much is true to historical sources vs. thought up by the author, but either way it added a dash of intrigue and depth to this well-done storygame.

Fun and I got perfect first time

It appears that I'm the best commander 1490 enemies killed

Well, an amazing game to say the least. Good job! =)

1070 killed, I feel like I fought on the wrong side though.

very good though but very long

It was great. Very enjoyable, realistic, and interactive.