Benta Sinco

Player Rating2.65/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 98 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

FantasySerious

You play as a traveler in a fictional world. You're goal is to make it through the forest alive.

Player Comments

This story was severely lacking in the description department. The author gave absolutely no context for the story's events. What was my motivation? Who was I? I enjoyed the author's pictures and the actual writing mechanics were very simple, but not horrible.

While the lack of description was a crippling problem for this story, an even larger problem was the lack of branches. This was an incredibly linear story and that ruins a lot of the fun.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 3/24/2014 7:50:58 PM with a score of 0
The pictures were fun and interesting. However, it was way too short and there's no proper ending. Before even thinking about branches in the story I think you might want to settle on a "main" ending before creating other side endings.
-- Placebo on 4/11/2017 9:03:55 AM with a score of 0
...too many ways to die-ie! 50/50 chance you'll die with every choice you make, not alot else to do with your choices...
-- Chickdove on 3/27/2017 7:36:28 PM with a score of 0
The story itself, and the notion behind it was fine. I wish there was more description in the environments, and actual goals. Without that, or any backstory, you don't really feel a connection to the character, or a reason to keep them alive. Also, I couldn't find an actual ending. Maybe I just missed it, but all I found was a dead page. An actual ending would very much improve the game.
-- _Abby31 on 3/19/2017 5:55:55 PM with a score of 0
I like the story, but it was a little too short. There was some errors in the story. If I were the writer, I would describe how the wounds felt fighting the thief, how the reader would "feel" about sword fighting the thief.
-- Angulvak on 12/8/2016 11:22:54 PM with a score of 0
It is WAY too short.

I have no background, and there is no successful ending. I even went back and tried everything, but if I run from the bandits, it doesn't have any links or anything.

Needs more choices, items and better endings.

Other than that, it was OK, I guess.

4/8
-- Shadowgirl_101 on 4/27/2016 2:44:28 PM with a score of 0
The game is incompleat and linar. Every action leads to a dead end link or end game.
-- Dmanxbox on 11/2/2015 9:38:24 AM with a score of 0
I liked it at first, but then I got to a part where if I chased the bandit, I lost, and if I exited the town, the story randomly ends. It seems to have promise and quality, but it's just unfinished.
-- h2otwo on 9/5/2015 11:06:54 PM with a score of 0
The game is too linear, and it doesn't really have a point.
-- Allusional on 1/25/2014 10:06:58 PM with a score of 0
Good for a first, liked the pictures but whenever you win you get no comments so you have have to lose in order to comment on this storygame.
-- dischead on 1/5/2014 10:38:37 PM with a score of 0
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