Broken Wings

I really don’t know why I decided to read this instead of a more recent story, but this one really isn’t terrible.

SPOILERS

As some of the comments mention, it is a little weird to have a family friendly game that seems like it might be aimed toward children where all you can do is be a bird, flail hopelessly, and die. I definitely checked, and there isn’t any good ending or survival. This didn’t really bother me, and I suppose it didn’t say anywhere that this was supposed to be a children’s game, so what do I know?

It’s obviously very short, but I think these kinds of animal perspective games tend to be. I don’t think that I enjoyed reading it, but it definitely wasn’t bad. There is a level of writing competency that makes it easy to read, and the concept is interesting enough that I kept reading it, but really, after you experience one ending there’s no reason to keep reading it.

All in all, I definitely don’t regret reading it, and I think it’s short enough that nobody’s really going to hate it.

This is one of those games that makes me feel all sad ;-;

You did a really good job fleshing it out, and I could really feel for the bird, and feel sad and bad about what happens to it.

This storygame has an interesting plot, and although it was short, I liked the writing and the style of the author. I would read more from this author in the future.

That being said, I found this storygame to repeat itself a bit, which is a bit annoying and boring, but I guess it was still a good read overall.

Like some of the other comments say, it was inspiring. I really want to grow wings and injure one of them and then go on this adventure to see what it's like xD

3/8, good job but not the best.

I liked this game, it was sad and nice to see things realistically from a wounded animal's point of view. Within it's limits it was a good short-story game :)

The ending was sad. I don't think there's an ending where you live.

Well it was sad ..please make one happy ending

it was good kkinda short tho

It’s kind of sad

fun and quick

its sad

Try it yourself! :3