Player Comments on Can you survive this?

This didn't take much time to make, did it?

I hate to be the one to rate this a one, but I did for multiple reasons. First of all, you say it yourself in the story summary, 'One wrong choice means your death'. While that's all fine and dandy, that only works in certain types of games, and even then, at certain parts. The reason this wasn't fun at all was because of it. It should be a game, but I was being forced to think like YOU think, not like myself. That made it harder, but even then, I beat this in maybe two minutes. Additionally, some of the deaths (like where you call 911 right at the start) were random and had nothing to do with the previous scenario and couldn't have been seen coming or avoided.

There also was no solid story, with random things happening for no apparent reason. Where did the monsters come from? Why are they out to kill me? Who am I?! These could have been easily answered, and I hope that after reading this, you can think about your work and how you can apply everyone's advice to it.

Its ok

Typical, you are never seen again anyways

This is the best damn game I ever play! (It are awesome! P.S. I'm not the author trying to get good ratings.)

U mm non of this made sense for example the 911 death at the beginning

Just...eh.

That was the quickest horror story ever. I liked it, but I really think you should wait till' the end before you announce if you win or lose. I really do not get it how you made a girl kiss then kill. GOOD STORY!

I liked it

This was like a horrible episode of csi.

PILE OF SHIT MY DOG MAKES BETTER STORIES THEN THIS SHIT

I really liked the game.

I originally rated it 1, but after winning I rated it 2 :D

I... just... I don't understand, I played this because of the name "oh, obviously I'll survive this" and pretty soon I was swearing black and blue at my computer screen, as well as non-violent sentences such as "WHAT!? CALLING 911 WOULDN'T END UP LIKE THAT!?" this game forces you to abandon any instincts you have, the horror effect is good until you *SPOILER ALERT* bury your neighbour in a "spooky forest"...

stay away, far FAR away...

This game is brutal! The go back button had quite the exercise...

Ended pretty quickly

Not bad, if a little boarding.

Pretty boring and not that scary. It was awfully short, yet nevertheless I found myself skipping pages out of boredom, then going back and reading them since I knew I was supposed to. This story is also really pretty easy because of a little thing called the "Go Back" button.

This thing is also crazy linear. Try to expand the plot next time.

Never be a hero in a horror story.
Never use a vehicle that is faster than your running either?

The deaths are a bit too nonsensical. You can't even use a Fiore dagger disarm on the bad guy!

Nice, I died only once. But, it was a great game.

this is bullshit

pretty dumb. I won.

a pretty good game

Eh. 5/10. Ends surprisingly quickly. I did NOT survive.

Guessing game...... seriously rated 1

A shit, linear, guessing game. Waste of time, doesn't engage the reader at all.

Not Bad Not bad at all

I liked the horror in it, but I wished you put some pictures in it. Nevertheless, I gave you a 6/8. I hope you'll make another one, only, yes, this time, could you put some pictures in it? Good Job!

This is kinda great. First death I've had was to the guy's knife, while I tried to get his. How ironic XD

I'm not sure if I'm more concerned by my (the reader's) character or by the weirdoes that seem to populate my town, it reads like something out of Bukowski. Perhaps it's fortunate that the constant sudden death choices will stop most readers from meeting too many of these psychos.

i survive but i did not get it.

ok it was not fun because it was too creepy

CREEPY

A linear, piece-of-shit guessing game.

I win! Pure luck!

Well, it could use better punctuation.

Snarkiness aside for a moment, you really do have some very noticeable errors for a short story and too many insta-deaths. I'd get a beta-reader and a longer, more detailed plotline if I were you.

... There's this thing called "proper punctuation." It makes stories nicer to read. I'd advise looking into the subject.

Damn, I was like guessing for every option. It was really cool, but I wish the game was longer. If only there were more paths and options that don't lead to insta death... :(

Hmm, it's not the worst CYS out there that's for damned sure!

It was interesting, although the format of the story was pretty bad, and the spelling was very noticable.

The grammar made the game hard to look at and play. Though over all, an interesting and imaginative story.

I died, but this was awesome!