filler episode

a Modern Adventure by bnha

Player Rating1.17/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

based on 34 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Player Comments

no just no

-- omgitschowhall on 6/30/2016 4:45:36 PM with a score of 0

There are basic essentials in a story. One is good grammar. This story had none. I would sincerely recommend you delete this and make a MUCH better attempt at writing a story. This is by far the worst story I have read on this site so far. Try reading other stories for inspiration.

1/8

-- Cocoabeans on 6/19/2016 1:52:22 PM with a score of 0

Hey. This thing was full of aids. But at least you tried :')

-- SkyTenshi on 6/19/2016 5:55:04 AM with a score of 0

I'd like to throw this in a volcano, destroy the volcano, destroy the landform that the volcano was on, and burn the remains.

This is really, really awful. Not to be mean, but you have to be able to take constructive criticism.

-- At_Your_Throat on 6/18/2016 5:25:06 PM with a score of 0

This sucks.
Just kidding, this is true art.
A masterpiece, I would say.
But really, it's horse shit mixed with AIDs, leukemia, progeria and malaria.
And a side of dysentery. You can never go wrong with dysentery.

-- Chris113022 on 6/17/2016 6:40:18 PM with a score of 0

Free point. Useless otherwise.

-- madmax on 6/17/2016 3:35:45 PM with a score of 0

Chooseyourstory:free point
Me: Yay, I guess?

-- Turbotorque on 6/17/2016 2:59:02 PM with a score of 0

Thanks for the point?

It does seem like you put a small amount of effort in, enough to make me think you could write and actual story that wouldn't be deleted if you weren't going for 'random and intentionally awful' for whatever reason.

-- mizal on 6/17/2016 8:46:29 AM with a score of 0

.......ooookkey

-- dragon396 on 6/16/2016 11:10:21 PM with a score of 0

Free point! (Other than that, this storygame only caused me to scratch my head in confusion.)

-- WouldntItBeNice on 6/16/2016 9:40:43 PM with a score of 0

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