Goomba Village

This was even worse than the last one I reviewed. I have no words, other than the mods must be keeping this up so that members can get a free point. Thanks, mods!

It was OK, I guess.

yeah no

This story is god awful. It seems like it was made in 5 minutes! It's also absolute bullshit. The story is nonexistent, the grammar is terrible, and spelling is bad.
1/8 Disappointment.

I felt a deep spiritual connection to this story. I relate to the way that the Goomba struggles to fit in to the adult world, burdened by mundane things such as work and other aspects of adult life. 8/8

This game was terrible. Thanks for the free point!

This is so bad I'm honestly half convinced the author is just trolling us all. I would have been totally on board for a story of a goomba in a goomba village too, the premise sounds just goofy enough to be good in a weird way. But this is basically just a pile of typos and bad grammar radiating laziness for ten miles in every direction. I'm not even sure why it's listed as fanfic, the 'story' has absolutely nothing to do with the title and description.

Not interesting at all. =\

I gave it a 1/8
My rating was a combination of the lack of plot, the shortness (a result of it's almost lack of story), and the horrible, grammar and sentence structure. The latter made my eyes melt, and simultaneously caused my brain to rot. Although I feel bad for putting it that way, it is in fact the truth. This story should either be redone (enough to bring up to a 2/8 at least), or completely scrapped.

I feel cheated :(