Live the Life of a Cat

Well, it's not warriors...

So, the first issue we have with the game is that there are no real choices. A few pages had links ranging from about one to four. The issue with the pages with more then one link, is that it pretends to offer choices and branching, when in reality, if you choose any of the links besides one specific one, they all just link you to the other option that progresses you. Your job as the author of a choose-your-own-adventure story is to make sure the reader has meaningful choices and a pleasant experience reading it.

That being said, I did find the writing and the overall story in general to be rather cute. It was short, but had a certain charm to it that made it quite adorable to read through.

The detail could use work. Not having much detail certainly raised the linearity of this story, and made for a rather confusing setting at most points.

Character development was below average. It would have been nicer if you'd made a better attempt to flesh out the emotion and characteristics of the characters in this story, because then the reader would have a better reason to try and understand how the characters feel.

2/8, try harder, you've got potential.

This was actually quite adorable. The writing wasn't bad by any means as it was quite serviceable with the setting that was provided for the reader. This storygame is exactly what the title says, maybe just a bit too much. There's not much happening in the story, but I suppose cats don't exactly live exciting lives, or at least lives that many would find interesting.

Still this was quite a cute story that I didn't mind reading through to the end. The imagery and descriptions certainly aided in making this a decent storygame. My only minor complaint is that I felt more could be done with this story to make this more interesting to read. Also, it's quite linear, despite it's nice writing.

All in all, this was pretty enjoyable to read. Despite some of the flaws that are present.

A pretty good text game and great details I loved that you add 6 years old (Human years)

Cool game

its entertaining and little kids would love it so good job

It nice, no bugs but some more things to do, then I might like it better:3

Very good game! But a bit short and I picked my life and it said I had a bad ending :( I thought that seemed kinda harsh. Other than that it was fun! :3 if u haven’t already made other games I suggest making another.


-Moonmist ❤️

This was very cute! I loved being a cat and just living life!

Awesome! Princess is a cute name and i imagine myself as a small, cute little tabby she-cat with tiny white paws and beautiful blue eyes.

i HATE this GAME