Missing in Action
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Played 1,883 times (finished 138)
"Trek through the forest"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Based Off A True Story
A story about friendship and survival.
' first storygame.
This was a very well written short story. It was entertaining and kept my attention throughout.
From the start, you can tell that this story is well written. The characters were pretty well developed and react logically within the narrative. Grammar, structure, and spelling are done well. And the story is paced in a way to keep you interested.
This story does fall a bit short when looked at in a CYA format. There were a couple of early endings based upon choices, but many of the selections that should be meaningful just fed back into the same narrative stream. Getting lost in a cave can open up so many different possibilities that would have been fun to be able to explore. However, though it seemed the author was pushing towards a single path, in many cases these choices allowed the characters more screen time for a longer story.
Overall, an entertaining and well written short story that is definitely worth reading.
on 5/19/2022 10:21:18 AM with a score of 0
A nice little story. enjoyable to play/read.
on 1/8/2021 12:37:56 PM with a score of 0
doing anything is better than homework
— p on 12/16/2020 2:34:25 PM with a score of 0
Would be better without cuss words.
— Zach on 3/18/2018 4:50:53 PM with a score of 0
It was good, not the best but very good.
on 3/13/2018 2:53:18 PM with a score of 0
It's a good story but there's no real danger in the climax but the tension is there though. 6/8
on 12/29/2017 12:10:23 AM with a score of 0
your work was really good just add some thing more fun:)
on 4/12/2017 4:06:03 PM with a score of 0
it was a little boring ,but fun:)
on 4/12/2017 4:03:38 PM with a score of 0
— FourElemental on 11/30/2016 11:25:04 PM with a score of 0
Really well written.
on 5/7/2016 1:24:23 AM with a score of 0
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