Player Comments on Overthrown 2: A World Without a King

Wow. This may be as good if not better than the first. The action was always intense and written well, and I could literally imagine the battles taking place, thanks to the strong imagery provided by the impressive writing.

I would love to see a third game in this series, because both storygames tell me that there's just so much that can be done with this setting. ^^

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fun!

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Though the story may be engaging, but I would also like to point out in one particular part of the story- you stressed about how tough and dangerous an opponent Ophiotaurus can be, and how seemingly impossible it is to locate him. I was actually quite looking forward to seeing how Gaius and his band of new friends will find and fight him. However, Ophiotaurus proved be much less challenging than you claimed to be. I was actually quite disappointed with how easily they dealt with him, and all my hopes for another intense-filled battle were dashed.

My suggestion is- try to avoid emphasizing on things that may not be the main focus of the story. It may become misleading and this will only cause your readers to become disappointed in the end.

Overall, though, good job! Keep up the great work! I will be looking forward to seeing part 3! I gave

I am impressed! This story is filled with so much intense and anxiety that I could not take my eyes off the screen. You left me almost close to tears when I realised that you actually left a cliff hanger! I hadn't expected that it would end so abruptly when things were starting to get heated up!

One thing that was commendable about this story would be the way you describe the battle scenes. They were AMAZINGLY good. You had intricately highlighted every single detail and I was able to picture out everything without much of a trouble. That’s what every hardcore fan of fantasy like me looks for in a writer, and you have done a splendid job!
I also like the idea that you gave us a more variety of choices during the battles. I went through every single possible option and I really enjoyed it! Though it may still be somewhat linear (since it is more of a story than a game), I still had

The original was good, but I will admit you've managed to improve with your sequel.

cool like the first, probably better then the first

Relese the next one

The ending threw me off. Will there be another one?

make another one

This story is bad

I hope the third one is made 8/8

Should've kept the scythe then maybe he would've had it easier and he's too narrow minded if he can't kill them then do it the hard way imprison them and have zeus go to Kronos for a reunion maybe they would plan together or just be depressed

Seems intersting

Awesome

Interesting story

I liked this a lot. I know that this is not a CYOA, but i kinda liked this short story. Keep it up.

you have improved your writing scince part one , cant wait for part three , i hope that part three will be longer though.

Good can't wait for part three

this is great story too

Lets try to change that story difficulty from a 1/8 to a 4/8 or above for the third one. Try for different endings, instead of the same ending no matter what you do

Fun I guess

Very interesting

yeaaaa, more about Greek mythology. cool. :D

Not bad, 6/8

Cool. I'm not ususaly into Mythology, but this was pretty good.

Really nice! Once again you've spun a magnificent tale!^_^ Glad our brave hero has some friends. Once again, this was more singular story than choose your own, but still very good. Mad props! I look forward earnestly for number 3! You, sir, are a magnificent writer!

Awesome stuff!
I defeated God of War.

Great writing and story. Keep up the good work

Still pretty linear, but I hope you can make an even WIDER story next time.

Can`t wait for the third

I love it! Just as good as the last one! Please make another one! I can't wait!

I love it! Just as good as the last one! Please make another one! I can't wait!

I liked the other one a little bit better because I had more options during a battle. Still, it was amazing. Loved how the story is developing and I hope Gaius can let go of his hate and change for the better. Keep it up.

6/8

Kalun Approves! Super!

Too confusing to uneducated folk such as myself. I didn't know any of these people besides Zeus.

Great story. You made some pluralization and tense errors, as well as incorrect spelling, But the game was good enought to cover it up. Bo approves

Really awesome! Very well written. I would consider this for featuring if it wasn't so linear!

Very good.

i like it :)

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I gave this a 7/8!

Sorry that this was ridiculously long review, but I hope that it would prove to be of some help! =]

Well, here it is. . . Part 2! Please leave a comment and tell me what you think. Enjoy!