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Warden

Overthrown 2: A World Without a King

Gaius, now a God, attempts to avenge his mother's death from his own father, Zeus. What he didn't realized is that making war with the lord of the Gods is not as easy as one would expect. Can he take on all of them on his own? Find out in the second installment of Overthrown!

So, same drill, this storygame is more of a story than a game, so please rate as a story instead of a game. And, just for your information, I'm still trying to get used to the editor and this story writing process, so please bear with me. All comments are appreciated, especially the negative ones so I can make a better Part 3, which as of right now will probably have the conclusion. . .

Something new about the part 2 are hidden battles. In the first part your choices don't matter that much which made the story very linear. In the part 2, I tried to make the story a little bit wider in terms of range by having different kinds of battles between your choices. BEWARE some choices you make can lead to awesome battles which also mean some choices you make can lead to no awesome battles... the point is you should try going back and choosing every option to see all the incredible battles I've stored for you.

Overthrown: The Makings of a God

Live as Gaius, a demigod sired by none other than the Lord of the Gods himself, Zeus, in an attempt to right some wrongs. You live in ancient Greece where monsters, Gods, and other unworldly beings walk the Earth alongside mortals.

A group of refugees are escaping from their hometown of Cione. They told of a giant so terrifying that even Gods fear it. As a hero who aims to make a name for himself, what would you do?

Discover and live a story unlike anything you've witnessed before.

As this is my very first game (it's more of a story so...) Please don't expect anything exceptional. I didn't try to make it a game where you win or lose, it's a story and the choices you make just changes how the story will go and you can only have one ending. You can never lose, unfortunately. Rate this how you would rate a story, not a game.

This story is for hardcore readers only, if you're not prepared to read a lot then this is not for you...

ok or you could do that... I guess PM me comments? ty Bo

Ok this story is growing way longer than I initially expected it to be but its coming out fine. I just finished my 170th page and now I need some feedback. Can anyone help me out here? I can add you as a coauthor so you can tell me what you think. I haven't finished any major endings yet but the story is still coming out fine, in my opinion.

I'd break up with her (unless she's way hotter than I imagine her to be). Only because I think it's so rude for someone else to try and force their beliefs on some other person(namely myself). If a person wants to be a vegan why should that mean I have to be a vegan? If me eating a Big Mac(or something with bacon) and you eating a salad does not entice me to switch to become a vegan, what reason do you think that I will change if you tell me to? You can be a vegan as long as you keep it to yourself.

You mean the Rick Riordan one right? If so, I can't wait for the second book!

Yeah choiceofgames.com... I loved Choice of Dragon and that's how I came to find this another awesome site!

Is it just me or is there more and more people logging into this site nowadays? It used to be about 10 guests and 5 users logged on at average in the same time. Now, we have like 30 guests and 10 users everytime. Let's make this site better!