Revenge on the River Lord

A mystery / thriller storygame by GeniusPancake

Commended by EndMaster on 4/2/2024 10:47:07 PM

Player Rating5.33/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on 14 ratings since 03/27/2024
Played 178 times (finished 17)

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Ever since a big flood dealt great damage to your town, the chief woman has made up her mind that the legendary River Lord is real, and believes firmly the River Lord needs a new wife every year.

Born in an ancient Chinese village, you, unmarried and pretty, was perfect to become the River Lord's new wife. You had to make a decision, and fast, before you became one of the many young women lying below the riverbed... 

There are some 'good' endings, but no perfect/true ending. The difficulty is how hard it is to get a 'good' ending.
This is my first story and my first contest entry not counting that piece of crap I never finished when I was 10.
Entry to EndMaster's Prompt Contest 3. A story set in a town getting ready to make its yearly sacrifice. (Prompt #44)

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