Seasons Change
A
love & dating
storygame by
haleybughime
Player Rating
5.07/8
"#254
overall
, #5 for
2014
"
Based on
201 ratings
since 03/13/2014
Played 5,952 times (finished 298)
Story Difficulty
5/8
"Run through the jungle"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
5/8
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Tags
Drama
Romance
Serious
Socially Important
A simple story of two girls and the changing seasons.
Player Comments
Well my Dad sure will be surprised when I tell him his only son has become a lesbian :) On a serious note this is a beautifully written story in the style of Snow and Farewell my Childhood Self. A good mix of choices and development there but I would have liked to see the relationship and experiences explored in more detail, getting into a relationship as a teenager is a scary enough experience but getting into a gay relationship as a teenager in a judgemental society, I imagine that's pretty emotionally challenging. 7/8
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Will11
on 3/8/2015 10:48:11 PM with a score of 0
Wow, this is a powerful CYOA! It definitely was very well put together, but I was sad at the ending(s)! This really demonstrates the power of love, no matter how different we are, or how the world thinks of us. Great piece of art! :)
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— Abbey on 8/4/2022 3:53:14 PM with a score of 0
Noooooooo why? There needs to be a happier ending.
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Zarlox
on 3/10/2021 1:56:50 PM with a score of 0
This game was beautifully written!
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Portal
on 12/31/2020 11:03:01 AM with a score of 0
A beautiful story and a great writing style to fit it. A few spelling errors throughout, but they're not very noticeable and don't take away from the story. A good, light read with a darker theme. It would have been nice for the relationship to be explored a little more, but other than that I absolutely loved it. I'm beginning to realize my review is very similar to Will11's, but it's coincidence I promise, haha. 7/8
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Megumeme
on 11/30/2019 1:06:49 AM with a score of 0
Hey, I got the good ending!
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magicchess29
on 11/3/2018 12:33:43 AM with a score of 0
wh why that was good i cried
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— tay on 10/16/2017 2:32:18 PM with a score of 0
(No no no my favorite season IS spring I can't believe I was forced to choose summer! Fall and winter, I can't even contemplate :(. )
Anyway, this story has quite a lot of potential. You did a good job of evoking emotion, although it would have been nice to see more background stories for the main characters. For the memories part, for instance, you could have described a specific situation that helps develop the character of Hana even more. Remember, details make things a lot more interesting.
My one main problem with the story is its linearity. Given that this is in the romance category, this was somewhat forgivable, especially since it was decently written. However, **spoiler, sorry** it would be nice to have a perspective where you can choose not to fall in love with Hana, or even a way to prevent Hana from dying (I don't think I found an ending where she doesn't jump?)
Overall, good job. It is a bit reminiscent of the classic Snow, but with a different twist, and certainly one of the better ones that I've seen. 5/8.
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crazygurl
on 6/19/2017 1:48:57 AM with a score of 0
I thought it was cool, but I'm confused. I thought the character I was playing was a girl????
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AdrianneDeforest
on 6/7/2017 3:56:50 PM with a score of 0
amazing
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— c on 12/23/2016 6:09:10 AM with a score of 0
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