Tenebrae

Player Rating2.83/8

"#791 overall, #94 for 2014"
based on 55 ratings since 08/30/2014
played 263 times (finished 63)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

The dead man's search for light, a lost man's search for hope, but in a world of darkness, not all is pleasant...
 

This is for the 90 minute story writing challenge! So it will be short...

Player Comments

It's Fine.
-- Wildempathy on 6/3/2018 12:11:42 AM with a score of 0
"Continue thrugh the open expance
You continue to journey through the rugged terrain, never stopping, never looking back, only one thing in mind, but that thing never comes, you become the hopeless traveler, the one who never found peace, the one who just continued on..."

Well yeah, of course, that's what we call a restless spirit ;)
-- TestingJest on 12/9/2017 2:04:11 AM with a score of 0
Is there any ay not to die, become evil, or give up!
Good game though.
-- DRAGONEREST on 2/19/2017 7:19:52 PM with a score of 0
Very well written.
-- ATMystic on 7/8/2016 12:05:32 AM with a score of 0
Great writing. I find that you do descriptions really well and I really feel the moment when you write it. That said, I do have to agree with the other comments about the lack of backstory. Better than I could write in 90 minutes, that's for sure. 4/8.
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 5/17/2016 7:41:25 PM with a score of 0
Kinda lame kid. Even if it was a 90 minute story, you could have least put more thought into it.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 12:03:30 PM with a score of 0
Wasn't the most interesting, but intriguing at the least.
-- TheSophia on 8/31/2014 6:14:31 PM with a score of 0
It was a short story, but an intriguing one at that.
-- Madbrad200 on 8/31/2014 4:34:57 AM with a score of 0
It was kind of interesting, but I don't really get it. I think the poetic style of writing and the whole idea of a world with no light are kind of cool, but you didn't explain why the world was dark or who the character was or anything like that.
Still, not bad considering you wrote it in 90 minutes. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 8/30/2014 4:25:48 PM with a score of 0
Even though it was written in 90 minutes, I feel that you could have thought a bit more about the backstory before writing. It would have been interesting to include flashbacks of the person's life, and a bit more description of whatever limbo/hell you're stuck in. Sorry, 3/8. There's a reason for the time limit.
-- insanebutvain on 8/30/2014 6:29:24 AM with a score of 0
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