To Make a Sandwich
, #15 for
Played 3,882 times (finished 440)
"Trek through the forest"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"Choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You are hungry, and need to get to the kitchen for a sandwich.
This was pretty random, but the writing was coherent enough to make the randomness quite entertaining. I didn't expect that I would possibly be able to go on a fun filled adventure with a Capybara when I clicked on the title, so points for originality!
Some of the scenes generally made me laugh, but I couldn't help but feel that the story itself could've been fleshed out a bit more. Only a few paths truly leads towards an adventure, while the others are rather short and to the point.
Also, there is some instances when picking a certain choice will loop you back into the beginning, but that's only really a minor issue. One that was made up by the number of choices that lead to me meeting a ninja, or even fighting zombies.
This story retains the quality of it's writing throughout, as grammatical problems were never something that I found myself running into as I read through each path. So in a technical sense when it comes to the presentation of things, this story does well.
Overall, this is a fun game to kill five minutes with. The humor and general randomness might not be for everyone, but this was written well.
on 1/15/2017 3:14:55 PM with a score of 0
i has da sammich
on 6/13/2023 9:01:28 AM with a score of 0
— Hh on 5/27/2023 2:18:03 AM with a score of 0
It was fine for a random game.
on 4/24/2023 10:43:54 AM with a score of 0
Hello Mr. Author,
I think that you are talking about the story of my missing son. I would like you to give me all the information you know about him and meet with me to have a tuna sandwich. If you have a problem with me then write it on a piece of paper and then give it to me so I could tell you that if your brain was dynamite it wouldn't be enough to make your blow your hat off.
— mr. capybara on 4/17/2023 7:14:23 PM with a score of 0
It teaches you that cabybara's are malevolous.
— Santa's gremlins on 4/17/2023 6:22:25 PM with a score of 0
— Hi on 7/20/2022 10:25:58 PM with a score of 0
grab the bread and your ingredients like ham cheese and mayo and then you put it all together then youre finished
— Teisah on 5/4/2022 6:39:46 PM with a score of 0
— Radhya on 3/17/2022 7:01:56 PM with a score of 0
this story was so amazing it has certainly chsnged my perspective of life. it was a maing and i love your work you have inspired me to start a carrier researching aliens zombie and dead cabyburas
— jerry on 2/28/2022 11:29:20 PM with a score of 0
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