"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played times (finished )
"Walk in the park"
"Make sure not to blink"
"Choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You're a 4 year old in the early 2000s playing on your mom's computer. You suddenly get sucked in! Can you escape?
It was kind of alright.
on 2/13/2021 9:35:55 AM with a score of 0
Lots of grammar and writing issues. Short but fun-ish.
on 2/12/2021 11:32:26 AM with a score of 0
Well I went in with very low expectations, and for what it's worth this did manage to just barely exceed them.
Biggest annoyance is that on the page 'Go Back to the Desktop' the link to The Voice is broken. Please test your under 1000 word game before you publish next time, there's no excuse for missing that in a game this size.
Grammar and all that is mostly fine, barring a couple of punctuation goofs. This actually works out pretty well as a kid's game so I'll go ahead and add the family friendly tag. Just wish there was a bit more happening, this could've easily been expanded to double the size.
on 2/10/2021 7:30:22 PM with a score of 0
Didn't make sense. There needs to be a plot with choices to engage the reader. Also, the option to cancel at the start was fake and pretend choices irritate readers. This is too short to hold a reader's attention in any case.
on 2/10/2021 7:28:46 PM with a score of 0
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