Player Comments on You're the Bachelor

I have admittedly never seen any Bachelor show, but that didn't pose any problem for me in enjoying the subject matter of this storygame. It had humor, which was sometimes hit or miss, but I don't believe that the writing was bad. Actually, I found certain scenes quite humorous as I read them.

Also, I liked the pictures that were used in this storygame. They never felt out of place and served well in enhancing certain scenes with some rather interesting visuals. These pictures were used sparingly, but utilized well.

I did notice that no matter the choice that you pick, you always do end up with the same three woman at the end. So that fact did damper my enjoyment in my other playthroughs somewhat. But if there are some positives, it's the many nonstandard gameovers or how choosing on whether to propose or simply ask a contestant out changed the ending as well.

The women themselves felt bland character wise, static even. But I suppose that is something to be expected when there's dozens of other maidens vying for the bachelor's attention. Such a scenario did provide for some interesting dialogue, even if the characters themselves didn't exactly appeal to me all that much.

For a quick read and maybe a laugh or two, this storygame does rather well. It does lack depth in many areas, such as the writing and characters. However, at the end of the day it's an adequate storygame and one that was enjoyable.

gosh y was this actually cute lol
I LOVE U SARA

WOOF WOOF!! AWROOOOO!!!

("I was looking for a place to stay while my dog house was being fumigated and ")

it ok

LOVE THIS!!! Going to try to get other endings now.

not the best, certainly not the worst.

not the best, certainly not the worst.

I have to admit that this is pretty good. I usually don't like these kinds of things, but this was decently written and I liked taking the high road.

I don't know but this story just didn't really hit home with me. The writing was decent enough, just felt like it was missing something.

Welp, that was a violent end... but it was pretty good, I guess. Enjoyable!

GREAT JOB WOOOHOOOOO LOVED IT

Yes

It's an okay game but I didn't feel like I know anything about the people I was choosing at the end.

Bruh, i fucked Jessica and my guy pussied out, not realistic at all, i would take advantage of everyone if i could.

Even though the game is entertaining, i find some mistakes on the writing that made me drop my rating by one. The top 6 says that i'm keeping a girl named Caroline but there's no mention of her at all at the next round...

A quick choose your adventure story game but there were lack of choices and it leads to the same girls at the end to choose.

Neither good or bad.

This was pretty good. You could do worse. I got Gemma by the way.

great story loved it

Pretty good game.

maybe make it lgbt+

An intriguing game for sure.

purrty good

That was so sweet

awsome game I love it

I am in true love with sara

Love it. Who else chose Gemma?

Super fun, wish there was more sexy action going on and hotter pics. I want to know the contestants more.

Too short

boring and not so instering

We purposely picked all the "jerk" answers, hilarious !! (~:

its fun just wish i gotten to know the girls i chose better

Honestly, I would like to learn more about the girls, but still it was very fun!

well it was pretty good i chose gemma the brainy redhead but wish thier was more chose in the game

Love it and I love bachelor

the idea is excellent, but well the choices are in no way intriguing nor in any way feel to be made by me, but are so rough.

nice game

didn't know so many women were against equal partnership

Nice plot. Lol took advantage of the lady.

amazeballs!!!!!!! luv it

short and sweet

fun game for when you get bored in class lol

good! Why impaling that girl on the cue...

It wasn't bad, but it wasn't good either.

tough

Way to many innuendos and mature hints for the maturity level the creator chose for the story.
Keep your children away from this one.

Awesome story!

Very fun. Tone it down a little... or up.;)

It was good I really don't have much more to say so good

I liked it

great! reminds me of my life.

It was amazing! I looooved it! So Sexy and beautiful!

Seems a little... I dunno. I guess it was kind of fun picking all the douchey choices and pretending I'm Duke Nukem, but I guess I always found the whole concept of the bachelor odd anyways.

You need to put a little more "detail" into it.

Thanks, it was fun! : )

nice game please make a sequel

A confusing but interesting plot.
I wish you would've made it a bit longer, a story needs to have a play length of 5 to satisfy some effort on my opinion, this was a 5 that could be improved.

The actions dont match with the name, its a very bad thing you always end up with the same girls, try again...

It's good... though I would have liked to go on dates with the final girls at least... you don't really get to know them and then you have to choose from some stupid description about them not who you got along with most

Wonderful plotline!

Cool game, quite realistic in terms of the outcomes.

Thank you for not requiring manwhoring to get through!

I was surprised to see the same three girls at the end despite different choices at the beginning. However, that was the only thing that bothered me. Interesting!

While the character depth could use a little expansion, the game allows you to be as sweet or as lecherous as you want, and there are many different choices and options. All in all, a quality date game.

I think the idea of doing a story based on The Bachelor is awesome. You definitely had the right idea! It needs more detail though. I was unable to identify with any of the characters because I didn't know any of them well enough.

Pretty good. might need a bit more detail or intensity into it though.

Too short. Boring. Stupid.

Not bad, quite interesting. I only didn't like that all the choices lead to the same final scene

Seth says MEH!!! Nice, but kind of boring in my opinion. 3/8

Good job. Especially considering the subject matter. If you had more influence over who you said goodbye to the game would be better. I've only played it once, but the game, at the very least, gives the illusion of having many possible outcomes. I'd bet it isn't an illusion.

It was cute... just way too short. I felt like I blinked my eyes and I was done. I would've rated higher if there had been more description and length to the story!

I Wish It had more details and more choices plus i wish it were longer

I.. actually liked this! Even though I'm a girl I still enjoyed this. I ended up with Sara, lawl. :P I just wish it could've been a bit longer, and maybe have the personalities of all the girls revealed in activities, and have you actually participating in the activity. I would've liked to ask more questions to delve deeper into their personalities. You knew no history whatsoever about the girls. Overall, nice job, and can I request a Bachorlette version?:D?

It was not that bad. There was a good amount of options and the spelling was decent. My favorite part was that I was rewarded when I chose the options that didn't involve being with every girl I possibly could. The parts that I think you could have improved in is that you could add a bit more pictures and options. For example, choosing where you had a date, dialogue optons, etc.

5/8

that was odd

Fun and cool

There are some choices in here that show hilarious results. Good story.

i have never watched the show so this was fun

kept being a very short game for me.

nice game:)

I had fun! This game is cool if you've seen the show, it goes along well with it.

Pretty good.

It's pretty cool seeing how guys like girls from a guy's point of view.

Amazing game i would love to see more of these:)

what is this story!?! It SUCKS DUDE!!!!!!

im not sure what i think of it. it's sorta weird i think. but it's still fun seeing how the girls react.

Funny (bad) ending on first run, got the girl on second. Well designed story game.

hehehe! thought i could go all the way..

Well, for someone like me who doesn't like romance so much that was good. :)

I got Sara. :) The game's pretty solid, but I think that involving the player a little more in the elimination process would make it a lot more fun and multi-faceted.

Pretty OK. Not much else to say; just "Pretty OK"

pretty good but you should make a story where your a girl and they are some hunky, six pack guys!! oooooo!

Wow pretty good. I didn't like the one or two sudden endings (Like eliminating the equal girls), but this was thought out well enough.

That wasn't bad. 5/8

it wuz ok

Nice and non-linear. Actually a good dating game. Great job.

This was fun!

It was alright.

Very interesting.

I'm not one for gushy romance, but that was okay.

Great game. Loved the idea.

How come it doesn't show each individual contestant? And no matter what I chose, round 3 always had that debutante Jessica. Make it longer and more realistic if there are gonna be 24 women in it.

pretty dumb...much like the show

This is one of the better "love and dating" stories I've seen, despite my absolute loathing of reality TV. Well written.

i just dont see the appeal in these dating games. sorry.

I liked it because I could take advantage of people. But I don't do that in real life obviously!

hi it was the best game ever i loved the pic with the hot tub.

It's not exactly outstanding as games go--I'm not saying it's bad, it's just not terrific--but it did make me feel warm and mushy inside, and that's ALWAYS a plus.

One of the better games here, it actually worked and made sense! Well done.

This is a really good game. I hope you will make a sequel to it. I give it 8/8

i need to find sara lol

sweet...even though i'm a girl

Awesome! make more! please!

thatwas pretty good

it is a preety good game

This Is A Boring Game No Real paths And No One Should Paly This.

it is the best

This sucks!

I like it.

It's alright but I was very unhappy with my ending. And there are a couple of spelling mistakes.

Totally demented, but good fun!

this is a really sexy game

awesome

inda boring

Cool, I wish it was longer though

sexy and it's true love!

i hate being pissed off at.

it was fun cool i like it

sexy!

bad ending....dude,,just because she went crazy doesnt mean i want to go home..i knew that was a possibility when i made that decision...just eliminate her and move on...your game made me angry..i hope the game gods have their way with you.+

This was a well thought out game, quite impressed

You know the last pic of the tub. That was soo unappropiate. How bout making a game that doesn't include, sexuality.

Cool game, I liked it.

I tried it a couple different ways, and despite my negative nature (View my other posts) I actually enjoyed this. Wow! I won a couple of different ways but I think there shouldent be any wrong choices: 7/10 my second best score given!

I loved it! I wish that it were real, cause I'm single, and all.

Igot my girls to kiss each other! HA HA!

Funny game. I got Sara. The death scenes were hilarious.

I got a good ending with Gemma. Does everyone have to put death into a game? I mean I always die or the devil takes my soul. That is not a real happy ending especially in the beggining of the game.

Hehe. Nice game. Took me a while to finish and was pretty fun :) I chose Sara.

awesome, its as simple as that! awesome

this game is sexy

bad

well well well... I really NEVER knew that the Batcalor on that show gets so much hot lovin'!!!

aww... so smooshy! or maybe that was just the way i played it...<br>LMAO this might not have been as funny if i wasnt a girl...<br>lol.. i had to pick whether to kiss them and whether i wanted to marry one... *dies laughing* can we have a female version of this?

Great game! Would be better if it was a little longer though.

i must've lost 4 or so times before i ended up picking sara. next time include miami more. that might be a lil' more interesting...

I AM GOD'S GREATEST GIFT TO THE OPPOSITE SEX!

I got Sara :P fun game!

So boring! Sorry for the author i don't want to hurt your feelings but it's true...

good game but i'm a total loser.why can't i choose the right girl.

Man, I was so sweet at this.

Ha! I've done many embarrassing things on dates, but never have I impaled a woman...oh wait a minute...strike that...

wow-- I accidentally impaled one of the women with my pool cue! whoops. :) I promise to be more careful next time. Can I play again? wheeeee!

It was ok, but too short

I found it interesting. A tad predictable, but that's not an insult. It pays excellent homage to the even drearier primetime counter-part. Good Job.

This game was really cool, kind of like reading a choose your own adventure book but even beteer. I'd play this one again

I liked the game. It was fun and made sense. I ended up with Sara and I made it all the way to the end on my first try! Good for me! HAHA<br><br>I think the game could have been a little longer, but maybe the author can make a Bachelor 2. Fun game. From a scale of one to ten... I give it an 8. Make a new one with more options and more scenarios to choose from. Also see if it's possible to give all 24 girls some type of personality and make it where you can actually choose any of the 24 girls on your own to take to the next rounds of the game. Great game!!!

good game lol. i dint get past da 1st elimanation but it was cool. i went 2 get rid off da intelligent lot. :(

That was good!!

I'm kickin it with Gemma right now...she's making me nachos. I think we're gonna get jiggy with the cheeze sauce......oh..great game!!!

That was a fun well written game

lol the accursed tub

nice

Boring! need pictures and animations

Make it longer, and make it for all ages.

Well, it's pretty cool, but you should make a kid's version of this little game.

Without all the big budgets, you did an awesome job at turning the bachelor into an adventure game. I almost see an underlying satirical force at play in your work.

great stuff. thanks for this game!

Interesting work. Well written.

I thought it was HOT!!!

Great game

Outstanding game! I won... i think... when does joe millioner come out?

Fine story until the end. That was an absolutely horrible ending. This game should be destroyed.

man, i proposed to Laura and she turned out to be a total player! I was scammed by a beautiful woman, just like real life... he he. great game. better go play again and pick a better girl!

Great Game!!! I loved it, picked sara, I'll be happy forever!! Wish the game was longer, could have played it all day happily!

not bad

good game

sexy

Fun game though girls were not included in my versions !<br>Must be a glitch ;-)

I Lost!! Is it any wonder I'm still single?

This game is good! One of the better ones on this site. There's not too much reading to do, but enough so that the story is intriguing. (I married Gemma in the end.)

How about these possible threads?<br>- visit the Playboy mansion and get jiggy with it<br>- after choosing the girl you like, get a Uzi 9mm to shoot all the birds that you don't like at the end<br>- hangin' and bangin'<br><br>yours,<br>Rick B<br>University of Washington

Hey, will you make a Bachelorette? This was a great game, but a little 'confusing' for half the population.<br><br>A+ though.

great game

crap, too boring, not enough options & adult themes & suggestive comments

this game is a little boring because there is not animation just black and white pictures. if i got to see pictures of the ladies and the bachelor or somtetihng it would have made ti mroe intersting.

I think that you should have real pictures of the girls. Also, I think you should have a bachelor and bachelorette option, so that girls can play as well.

An excellent game!

This game is so awesome, very well thought out . nicely done.

An absolutely amazing games, probably one of my all time favorite on the site. I played every side treck and read every option and my only complaint is that this game isn't longer cause i could play it for another half hour easy. Love the game, thanks for making it!

GREAT GAME!!! So funny! I played it eight times to see all the different endings! Nice one, janemcg!