You are a Fish

To be honest this was rather boring. Not only was it a failure in its attempt to make me laugh but it was also a failure in its attempt to be educational. All drains do not lead to the ocean! Stop spreading this misinformation!

I think had it had some visual aids or pictures to accompany it considering this is the family-friendly category it might have been fun, like when I got arrested by the minnow police or held hostage by eels but the creative exploration was lacking and it just looped me back to the beginning.

Also somehow I survived getting eaten by a hungry hobo which is not the ending I was expecting but hey it's ok to eat fish cause they don't have any feelings.

Overall boring with a few amusing moments but not enough to rate it higher unless visual aids and more branching and exploration of paths is included.

Not the best, but this could use some work.

I liked it I guess, but it had many problems. While there were a decent amount of links and pages I suppose, each page had a sentence to a paragraph on it, and details seemed little to none.

I suppose it was cute in a way, but I feel not much emotion for the fish, maybe because of a lack of character development or the small amount of detail. These things are crucial for storygames.

It was pretty illogical at some points, and I really can't say "the writing was good" since the writing was so little detailed, and I can't tell if i'd want to read more from the author or not :(

2/8, i'd spend more time on it if I were you.

Who knew that being a fish could be so exciting? I rather enjoyed this story, there were some mistakes with grammar but it wasn't anything too bad. I think this is a excellent storygame for children that ever imagined what it would be like as a fish, as bizarre as that sounds.

This was cute, so much so that it makes me want to want to explore all of the possible choices for a happier ending for myself. (I was eaten :c)

This sorry was really funny, with lots of choices but also lots of dead ends that I enjoyed and some weird twists.

Good

gil

I am the fish thanks for telling my story!

Short and sweet storyline, great thing to do if bored.

F I S H

For awhile, I thought, "Awh, this is cute. A game where I get to play a fish... Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming..." Then I read, "Go to a fish cafe," and thought, "Oh God, they're trying to be funny." >.<