You are a Fish
, #60 for
played 2,216 times (finished 235)
"trek through the forest"
"Make sure not to blink"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
This is a game in which you are a fish. It is fun, and an adventure! Choose wisely.
Not the best, but this could use some work.
I liked it I guess, but it had many problems. While there were a decent amount of links and pages I suppose, each page had a sentence to a paragraph on it, and details seemed little to none.
I suppose it was cute in a way, but I feel not much emotion for the fish, maybe because of a lack of character development or the small amount of detail. These things are crucial for storygames.
It was pretty illogical at some points, and I really can't say "the writing was good" since the writing was so little detailed, and I can't tell if i'd want to read more from the author or not :(
2/8, i'd spend more time on it if I were you.
on 3/10/2017 8:19:32 PM with a score of 0
Who knew that being a fish could be so exciting? I rather enjoyed this story, there were some mistakes with grammar but it wasn't anything too bad. I think this is a excellent storygame for children that ever imagined what it would be like as a fish, as bizarre as that sounds.
This was cute, so much so that it makes me want to want to explore all of the possible choices for a happier ending for myself. (I was eaten :c)
on 10/6/2016 12:33:31 AM with a score of 0
I'll be honest: I was expecting something absolutely terrible, but it was actually quite alright. You get to play as a brave little fish with plenty of moments of both awesome and funny. The grammar is spotty in places, but it's never bad enough to distract from the game. My favorite part of this game was how it allowed you to explore other paths and choices without having to abuse the 'back' button and reselect.
All in all, it was cute, amusing, and a better game than its low score would indicate.
on 7/29/2014 6:45:47 PM with a score of 0
For awhile, I thought, "Awh, this is cute. A game where I get to play a fish... Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming..." Then I read, "Go to a fish cafe," and thought, "Oh God, they're trying to be funny." >.<
on 7/24/2020 5:07:27 PM with a score of 0
A little flat. Real fish can be deceptively more interesting than this. Nice start, tho. :v
on 6/10/2020 12:39:18 AM with a score of 0
It's alright I guess
on 3/27/2020 8:09:34 PM with a score of 0
This is honestly great, I love it lmao
on 11/5/2018 1:58:00 PM with a score of 0
Lots of options made this story really entertaining.
You could also prevent the game from ending if you just kept choosing the same options.
on 6/28/2018 6:28:17 PM with a score of 0
Hmm... I don't know what to say. Just see for yourself, it won't take long.
on 6/13/2018 10:46:30 PM with a score of 0
It was a loophole. It kept taking me places I have already been.
on 5/21/2018 12:41:37 PM with a score of 0
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