Player Comments on Zombie Flesh Riot

Unfinished. Dead links all over the place. In fact, whole branches have dead links.

No way this should be a published game.

Just glad it is over.

CHOOSE YOUR OWN DEAD LINK...

READ THE RULES.No dead links.

I hate unfinished games...

And that's exactly what I'm seeing over here. So many pages with no links. Absolute no-no. The only redeeming quality was that your storytelling managed to keep me awake and a bit entertained.

When you see this, take my advice to unpublish and reedit this into something that uses your potential, because in its current form, it's just choosing your own boredom.

3/8.

The plot and characters felt very stale. The end goal was generic and the means of going about achieving them were uniform as well. What bothered me even more was the fact that when you met an end there were no End Game and Leave Comments screen. You need to have those in order to not completely frustrate the reader. I do applaud you for your vivid imagery when talking about the setting.

It's a no from me.

it was alright.

This wasn't a really good story. You sound more like an angry person who wrote this to talk about how much he hates people from a certain economic class, in the form of a "zombie story." It would have been bearable if you actually finished the story instead of leaving it at the rush ending it had.

Terrible, I wish I could rate it lower

So, adding end game (and leave comments) links to pages other than the last page and making the game less linear would make the game a lot better. But good job on the spelling.

Meh

Too hot to trot.

If you're going to make a game, then you have to give the player a more capable character than a scrawny chicken-legged boy who's a yellow-bellied coward.

>wake up
>be scrub
>kill zombie grandpa
>no f**ks given
lol

S-u-c-k-y. Bored the hell out of me.

...meh

0/8 Terribly rude.

The game should have end game links instead of just leaving the pages blank with no links at all

Good story... Bad commentary. Pls try to stop insulting the user at such a high level. It makes people think your story is crap. And also, finish it. No one wants to read a half made storygame. While I could go and ramble on about each detail, I'll simply say the hole story, premise and plot need work.

I clicked "Play".
On the first page, I decided that I was ABSOLUTELY going to go through this game. I HAD TO, just to leave this comment.
Really, on the first page you can find maybe ten profanities and I'd say that any one of them (or even all of them together) describes this game.

The author insults the user at every turn and implies and says that everyone is a worthless layabout in a very rude way.
The author should have this deleted. Stay far far away.

The author pitifully assumes that EVERYONE in existence besides him/herself is a jobless benefit bandit and spends the ENTIRE time nastily insulting you, no matter what you choose to do.

Stay far away from this game.

Well it was random. It insulted the reader for what would be about 80% of the text, sadly it failed to be funny or ironic while doing it. So over all a generic random game which isn't enjoyable to read.

This game seriously insulted the reader. I honestly think it should be removed. I don't know if you think you're funny, but if you insulted the zombies, actually this wouldn't have been such a bad story. But since you, in every single page, insult the reader, I give this a 1/8 for your twisted fucking brain!

Stop whining, learn to laugh at yourselfs.

quit insulting the reader.

cool

THis game makes no sense! I even saw a page with "THis is a new page" De veras?!? (Really?!?)

This was pretty stupid.
For starters, the author insults you on almost every page
Second, this game is extremely boring because almost every choice kills you, thus making the game very linear. And who likes getting constant death messages?
Make the game bigger and stop insulting players.

Meh, half the story was just the author insulting your character. Also hate when things are different:
Option A - Man turns out to be a zombie
Option B - Man turns out to be a normal old guy

Wooo.....

WOAH!~ *runs off to find second part*

I like this game because it has zombies and bowling balls and zombies getting killed by bowling balls. Very awesome.

Linear. Lame. And unfinished. Also zombies. I suppose you can guess my rating is low. 3/8

Great game

Love the random cursing.

i didnt like it bcause the auther kept saying stuff like "wow your a loser" i felt like screaming SHUT THA FUCK UP BITCH!!!!!

The epitome of awesome is when not only does a user leave a 1-word comment, it's not even true AND it's spelled incorrectly. Stronglime, you suck balls.

incoplete.

NOT ENOUGH STORY, AND THE NARRATOR WAS BEING MEAN TO ME!!!!1

Constant insult to the player, frequent fourth wall breaks, mockery of the story itself...my kind of game! 7/8

7/8. would have gotten an 8 if you hadn't made fun of me so much.

It was good until I started running into
"This is a new page" and "Kill your parents"

7/8. should be featured. better than all DZDs!

I think this is probably the best and first zombie CYOA I have ever played!

An okay game. Decent grammar but a good game.

Too many dead links, but I still gave this a high rating. Very fun, great humor, excellent writing. I particularly liked making it out and then being killed for being a layabout who would suck society dry.

Even better than a colonoscopy! :D

OK, not that good. Nothing can be that good.

the dead ends got annoying, but the length gave it a better rating from me.

^_~ it was great. Just tone down the insults a bit.

This Game ROCKS!!!! 6/8

ok, but to many insults...

Pretty good.

it was o.k. i guuss.

i think that was like the best damn game i ever played!

This is my new favorite game! I mean it must have taken you a long time to write all this and all the hard work. I congratulate you!

that was great, can't wait for the next.

is there a good ending here?

You still got it!

That was the funniest game I have ever played on this site, finish it and make a sequel.

this game is tight, but u need more endings, shit like that, itd be better if you just finished it

LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!THAT WAS GREAT!!IT WAS REALLY FUNNY!!!Though i think you should remove the swears

Cool Game.

That was a fun game it was really funny!!!

this game could be better

this game was leet and woot and stuff

Wow that game was pretty big. I liked the zombie movie influnce. I could of done with out the making fun of teen mothers and jobless. Actually the Romero zombie movies tried to promote a better aware concious enviorment. Where as yours was filled with hate. None the less I enjoyed your game. There's a feel to it. Deserving of the name FP.

This game taught me a lot. I never knew a group of Zombies was a Zaggle ... Zombological and Zombieism ... two words now added to my vocabulary. Oh yeah and it's pretty entertaining, too! Good stuff fishpaste