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A tiny blurb

12 years ago

An obelisk made of black marble sits eerily alone in the snow-covered clearing. It's silent there, not even the faintest whisper of the woods or the wind.

fergie14233

A tiny blurb

12 years ago

It's short, it just being two sentences and all, but it definitely sets the mood right away, which is great!

dreamshell

A tiny blurb

12 years ago

Those are two very gripping, suspense-filled sentences. I immediately want to read more. Therefore, write more.

BerkaZerka

A tiny blurb

12 years ago

"I waste it with my crossbow!"

But really, nice atmosphere. It draws you in for whatever trap it holds, ready to snap shut on you without mercy...