Glad too see you here! Just don't post like that too much, since EndMaster may get irritated. Anyways, I'm from America, so hello my England friend. I will try not to make it too difficult to understand me. Also, just an FYI (If you didn't know, it means For Your Information), the site seriously lags sometimes. It usually takes a short amount of time to load stuff, but here, it lags so badly that it takes 2-5 minutes for a page to load. And it happens at random times, too. But, good news, it apparently only does so in the summer. So, if you're lagging, that's why.
Some advice for writing: I always look for storygames that feel complete, and not "you do this. What do you do?" scenario. I want it to be "You do this. More details. What do you do?" Okay? Also, try to have good grammer. If your American grammer sucks, here's some Grammatical Tips It's from another website similar to this, and it's kind of dying. Only traffic on it is apparently for the adult stories. Also, Help & Info can explain this all better than I can.