I have sneak preview on as I decided to make a humorous take on gods from greek mythology just give me some ideas and the like along with some critisiscm.
It's just straight up porn, man. That's the whole plot.
Nah I don't get too descriptive. Endmaster has worse stories on here...
uh yeah, but his mature stories actually have a plot. The sex serves as a way to advance it. He literally wrote a whole article about this.
Well you see there's just one slight problem with your anthology.
You aren't Endmaster, and your story was really just poorly written smut under a mythological setting.
you mean analogy, right?
I was going to edit my post but you decided to reply before I could!
That was actually my intention. Just wanted to piss you off. :P
W-why do something so cruel to me lemons!?
Mason was right about you. u.u
Are... are people going to start calling me 'lemons' now?
Why do I get a nickname from one girl on every writing website I go to?
No, no, lemons is just fun to read out loud. I feel even more special that I called you lemons first here. Embrace the nicknames, embrace 'em!
Fruitacus (mockingly. someone I hated called me this.)
SL, which Kiel gave to me
and now Lemons.
I like lemons the best for it's charming simplicity. :3
fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine, you can call me lemons. >:c
they want your hot bod.
probably not. At least you get nicknames, though.
I wrote my story to be funny I just haven't really got done yet
Is this seriously what you use your second chance for?
To be fair its for humor...
Please use a good plot, and if it really isn't just straight out sexual and dead ends, then maybe people'll appreciate your writing.
linky or you stinky
They were being sarcastic on the 'well done' part.