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My mythology story...

4 years ago

I have sneak preview on as I decided to make a humorous take on gods from greek mythology just give me some ideas and the like along with some critisiscm.

My mythology story...

4 years ago

It's just straight up porn, man. That's the whole plot.

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4 years ago

Nah I don't get too descriptive. Endmaster has worse stories on here...

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4 years ago

uh yeah, but his mature stories actually have a plot. The sex serves as a way to advance it. He literally wrote a whole article about this.

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4 years ago

Well you see there's just one slight problem with your anthology.

You aren't Endmaster, and your story was really just poorly written smut under a mythological setting.

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4 years ago

anthology...

you mean analogy, right?

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4 years ago

I was going to edit my post but you decided to reply before I could!

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4 years ago

That was actually my intention. Just wanted to piss you off. :P

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4 years ago

*Gasp*

W-why do something so cruel to me lemons!? 

...

Mason was right about you. u.u

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4 years ago

Are... are people going to start calling me 'lemons' now?

Why do I get a nickname from one girl on every writing website I go to?

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4 years ago

No, no, lemons is just fun to read out loud. I feel even more special that I called you lemons first here. Embrace the nicknames, embrace 'em! 

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4 years ago

The nicknaaaaames...

Citrus

Limes

SwedFruit

Fruitacus (mockingly. someone I hated called me this.)

Juicy

SL, which Kiel gave to me

and now Lemons.

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4 years ago

I like lemons the best for it's charming simplicity. :3

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4 years ago

ugh

fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine, you can call me lemons. >:c

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4 years ago

they want your hot bod.

 

probably not. At least you get nicknames, though.

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

I wrote my story to be funny I just haven't really got done yet

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4 years ago

Is this seriously what you use your second chance for?

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4 years ago

To be fair its for humor...

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4 years ago

Please use a good plot, and if it really isn't just straight out sexual and dead ends, then maybe people'll appreciate your writing.

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4 years ago

linky or you stinky

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4 years ago

My mythology story...

4 years ago
Ideas: Write a real story that isn't stupid.

Criticism: This is stupid and not a real story.

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4 years ago
Less than 20 words per page was a bold choice.

It was like a smut story that didn't allow itself to get bogged down with anything tedious like plot devices or details.

Well done.

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4 years ago
See this guy gets it. XD

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4 years ago

They were being sarcastic on the 'well done' part.

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4 years ago
I know that's why the XD was there silly goose.