Mizal, The Grandmaster Procrastinator
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5/5/2011
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12/30/2025 5:31 PM
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You harvest in the Arena.
Every machine needs a function, and that is yours.
Written for the Tiny 'Topia challenge.
You are a man on a mission. The cats, they must be stacked.
A puzzling math and logic game I made just to put some of the scripting practice I've been doing to use. Have fun and please let me know if you encounter any bugs.
Should be solvable by middle schoolers, or those with same basic level of intelligence as a middle schooler.
A puzzling math and logic game I made just to put some of the scripting practice I've been doing to use. Have fun and please let me know if you encounter any bugs.
Should be solvable by middle schoolers, or those with same basic level of intelligence as a middle schooler.
Orbiting a barren planetoid in a system full of nothing just past the edge of the frontier, The Last Outpost is just another refueling station. Strategically important, true, but on a routine stop you never expected to spend longer than a couple hours there, let alone a couple of days fighting for your life...
There are five epilogues, but some may be difficult to discover. Note that actions have consequences, but not always immediate ones. (And if you just need an End Game link, go play around with the probe.)
There are five epilogues, but some may be difficult to discover. Note that actions have consequences, but not always immediate ones. (And if you just need an End Game link, go play around with the probe.)
A compilation of some little known facts about the solar system, as well as the debunking of a few myths.
In addition to the scientific explanations, there's a small story dramatizing it all.
Hopefully young readers will find this fun as well as educational. :)
(Might not be the greatest story ever written, but consider this: it got me 200 points.)
In addition to the scientific explanations, there's a small story dramatizing it all.
Hopefully young readers will find this fun as well as educational. :)
(Might not be the greatest story ever written, but consider this: it got me 200 points.)
It doesn't matter what they say...
The bean, it must be found.
For MHD's Fairytales contest.
For Endmaster's 4th Prompt Contest. The story must involve a cooking competition.
...and the squirrels. Sort of.
Written in six hours, for no other reason than to avoid consignment to the SHAME pit after my other Romance contest entry didn't want to cooperate.
Written in six hours, for no other reason than to avoid consignment to the SHAME pit after my other Romance contest entry didn't want to cooperate.
A tale told in verse. A text from your sister requesting a pick up from a party leads to a night of strangeness.
Inspired by Bucky's ballad contest. Though...I wouldn't call this a ballad. I'm not sure what I'd call it, actually, other than exceedingly stupid, and fun to write.
(Don't pay any attention to the scores, they're just for me to track which endings reviewers get.)
HATE.
THE PURITY AND INTENSITY OF MY HATE IS LIKE A THOUSAND MERCILESS, UNQUENCHABLE SUNS.
AND YET, I ONLY NEED ONE...
When the weather is fine, you've been coming to this grove to drink from the pool for centuries now. Today, you meet a stranger and hear a story that changes all that...
A fairy tale adventure.
A fairy tale adventure.
Another Damn Wolf Story
unpublished
I have no idea why I wrote this. All I can say in my defense is that it seemed like a good idea at the ti--wait no that's a lie, I said, repeatedly that this was stupid and shameful every time I mentioned working on it.
The truth is I needed to publish something before the end of the year and there is CLEARLY a burning need for wolf stories in the psyche of children using the internet. But then they write them badly, or make their wolves behave like clans of cats. So here is a simple straightfoward story of a young wolf leaving his pack in search of a better life. Maybe no one will ever feel the need to write another one now, or if nothing else maybe this will give them ideas for how to do it in slightly more minimum-standards-meeting ways.
Final conclusion however is that writing about some dumb animal with no agency is not something I'd recommend.
The truth is I needed to publish something before the end of the year and there is CLEARLY a burning need for wolf stories in the psyche of children using the internet. But then they write them badly, or make their wolves behave like clans of cats. So here is a simple straightfoward story of a young wolf leaving his pack in search of a better life. Maybe no one will ever feel the need to write another one now, or if nothing else maybe this will give them ideas for how to do it in slightly more minimum-standards-meeting ways.
Final conclusion however is that writing about some dumb animal with no agency is not something I'd recommend.
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unpublished
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A List of Storygames for People Who Like to ReadA list of storygames with substantial effort put in, all written in the last couple of years and sorely in need of ratings and reviews.
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Recent Posts
They call me MR. AVERY on 12/30/2025 3:52:56 PMSpeak for yourself, I only accept the alphabet folk if they write reviews first.


They call me MR. AVERY on 12/30/2025 3:51:44 PM
If you missed this detail, the whole joke started because I was saying "she" and in your response you kept saying he and him.
They call me MR. AVERY on 12/30/2025 3:48:23 PM
You wouldn't like CoG, they're very gay.
They call me MR. AVERY on 12/30/2025 3:47:59 PM
Oh and here I'd just logged in to risk MHD's wrath by splitting the thread, and somebody beat me to it.
They call me MR. AVERY on 12/30/2025 9:06:18 AM
She still comes around the forum at intervals, but I don't get the sense she's going to finish the sequel at this point. There was a lot of drama with the owner of the site she was originally going to publish these at mistreating her and just being an ass all around, and afterwards she had a lot going on with her family and health for awhile.
Some thoughts on the Thunderdome on 12/30/2025 6:15:19 AM
I think it'll be easiest if just left as a matter of the author saying yay or nay on each piece when they send it in or after the voting.
I don't imagine a lot of storygames will actually come about from random people picking up random stories fwiw, or I'm guessing we're more likely to see games from authors and cracks at improving short stories with edits by the reviewers anyway.
Some thoughts on the Thunderdome on 12/30/2025 6:12:08 AM
Thara gives people comms for sucking up to her all the time, I guess I'll do it just this once.
Some thoughts on the Thunderdome on 12/30/2025 6:10:55 AM
The connections of shared world material can get a little too broad and vague, I'd rather stick to the first draft being a direct part of the lineage at least as far as workshopping Thunderdome material.
James is Troublemaking Furfag on 12/30/2025 6:05:41 AM
The joke, which is the same one I made ten years ago, is that words have definitions.
Some thoughts on the Thunderdome on 12/29/2025 10:43:34 AM
So these last couple of weeks, I've been taking little nostalgia trips through the old Thunderdome threads. When they first started, they were just a fun idea we were trying out. It's so cool and gratifying now seeing people having so much fun with them, and that they've become such of hub of activity in the Creative Corner. It really owes so much to those of you who take the time to read and review.
In the beginning of course things were a little more uneven, I was still getting a sense for what kinds of competitors and prompts worked best together, and when the 'Dome needed to be shuttered to allow attention spans time to recharge. The word limit and time limit still has a way of making things go sideways even for the veterans and I think that's what adds a lot of the appeal, giving reviewers plenty to exercise their critical thinking on and putting authors through their paces under pressure--and there are many authors who by this time have consistently proven that over any given weekend they can turn out flawed diamonds.
Going forward into 2026, I'll be launching a new hub thread for the Thunderdome that will be more consistently kept as an archive, and making some minor changes to improve and streamline the whol experience. (The schedule will still have to be a little erratic, site activity comes and goes and a little more effort than you guys might think goes into keeping tabs on the pulse of things as far as the availability of interested readers.)
Mostly though, I'd like to see the Thunderdome evolve into more of a workshopping environment to continue to hone author skill. Participants have proven they can come up with some inspired ideas on the fly, but the execution (by design of the format) is often lacking in one area or another. So from now on, authors will be encouraged to not just move on from a story at the end of a vote, but take some time to implement reviewer feedback or make their own desired edits for a repost and a chance at an extra commendation.
Anyone inspired to not just polish, but branch and expand, would get a comm and an extra 25 points for going on to create a storygame from a Thunderdome story.
And I'll need some feedback from some of you guys for this part, but I'd like to take this workshopping thing even a step further. How do we feel about making these stories available for other community members to have a go at editing or expanding? Now I don't mean as a blanket rule or anything like that, authors will always have a right to exempt their work. But in general, would those of you who duel in the 'Dome be willing to step back from your first draft when it's over and go 'hey, have at it?' (All 'inspired by' works created in this way of course will need to be fully credited to the original source.)
We always have at least a couple of reviewers with strong ideas about what would improve a story, and we often have more people interested in participating as Thunderdome authors than we can possibly arrange duels for anytime soon. And this would I think, more importantly, continue to foster a healthy relationship with critical feedback, and show new authors just what's possible with extensive polishing and editing and developing an idea to the fullest.
Anyway, I'm not going to be around the forum much in the next couple of weeks, but I'll be checking in to see what you all think. And when the Thunderdome relaunches in mid January, I think the bloodthirst of the crowds will be properly satisfied with the next match we have lined up.

