A Tale of War: Thragnazil

A good game as a whole. However many of your options say in the game, do this or die. Guess what if you do that you countinue the story if not you die. Also the surrender scene ends realy fast, almost mid sentance. As far as I can tell there wasn't any spellin error, (but I'm no wizard so I may have missed them.) The story was great and all the detail realy brought this game to life, giving me some thing to realy fight for. The game also tested for morals, as you can slaghter a city of your kin if you so choose, and can end up saving the king or a large number of dwarfs. Again as a whole the game is great, but short and in the end you have a feeling of hopelessness. But you are fighting the army of death so the mood is rather fitting. 6/8 for whole story game 8/8 on your writing, can't wait to read more of your stories so hurry up and puplish them! ;)

just the right diffuculty, with no useless decisions

Shitty. Not even 5 min long and saw every end. All end are bad. Useless

A lot of choices were do or die, but other than that this story looked good.

Pretty okay story. Didn't really keep my interest

It was well written and the take on dwarves was interesting but with a unique story, the surroundings should be also, i felt like I had to make u the world, when I should be living in it. All together however it was fairly good.

I kind of liked the story though it is a bit sad that there is no way of you winning. There should in my opinion be a way to win that siege and at least make you and most civilians survive.
All in all not to bad though. 5/8

Not really liking this.

Is there seriously no way of getting a good ending without a bad outcome at the same time? "
The only 'good' endings mean i end up dead...
You are a hero, however, as the armies of Withros are kept at bay long enough for many to escape through underground tunnels and by ship. You are not one of those who escaped, but dwarves whisper about you while camping out in the forest, hiding from the armies of Withros.
Boras Tol, God of Battle and Father of Dwarves, brings you to Galuund, where you stay at his side for eternity, looked up to by all of Galuund's people."

I enjoyed this, it could have been longer. I'm not sure if there was any way to win this as it seemed most of the endings were bitter sweet. In any case I hope you write more stories in the future.