Jack and Jill Live On 2

Player Rating3.09/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 98 ratings since 04/15/2013
played 421 times (finished 103)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

Hey Guys. This is the second parts of the story. All your comments were really helpful, so yah, ill try to make it longer. *Has worried expression*.

Alright so this part will start with you being with Jack, cause I need him as a character.

Have fun!!!

Player Comments

This story is not all that much longer than the first, and although it shows some effort, not a lot of deep thought seems to have gone into it. For one, it is very linear. There is only one storyline in this story, and if you deviate from it, you die, or get directed back to the original storyline, without adding very much. You would also be surprised at how much developing plot, character personality, and range of real choices really helps the overall quality of your game.
-- VelvetInRed on 5/23/2013 6:19:16 PM
Nice to see you making some progress! Although this was better than the first, this wasn't too good either. It was short, linear and You need not to rush the pages. Most of the pages had 0 description and there was no background. And killing the queen was completely illogical. How come two people kill a dark queen so easily. Plunging a sword in her, really? I hope you would work harder for the next game. I can't really say that this was a good game but happy to see ya trying ;-) unlike some of the new members here. Haha. Please don't get disappointed by my comment but I can't rate you higher for your effort. I am giving it a 4 (2X better than first) and Wish ya good luck :-D! And oh! Watch out for those zombies! Yep! Right behind you!
-- Revenant on 4/16/2013 6:22:02 AM
Too short.
-- Quorrah on 1/18/2017 3:02:21 PM
It was very short and linear
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/15/2016 6:48:19 PM
Easy, but really fun, though you only get 2 choices her page.
-- COOL_ENDER_GUY on 8/16/2016 11:05:32 PM
It was fun but extremely easy
-- Abbie on 3/18/2016 5:28:26 PM
What happened to part 1? :/
-- Briar_Rose on 2/2/2016 2:45:37 PM
It was so easy to kill the Queen...
-- Mardox on 6/26/2015 8:50:48 PM
It had some good writing in there, but the poor descriptions of the characters made it a bit worse. It has potential if you put more time into it. It was a somewhere between meh and bad for me.
-- Claw2k11 on 5/8/2015 3:50:44 AM
You should write more! This was good!
-- Il_Maestro on 9/3/2013 7:52:35 PM
Show All Comments